INDIAN CRICKETER

writer you should continue to write but the character is shown to overpowered at beginning please make it more humane and please upload the story regularly best of luck

Dropped. No long term vision. Very disappointing start. This is what happens who start writing writing without plan. First an overpowered system that dictates the story. Then handling human interactions, there also they fail, and use system as a cheat. Then progression and improvement. Epic fail. But hey atleast you creating something instead of just ranting. Good luck