Harry Potter: Fire Lord Black

The only high rating I gave it was due to the consistent update but other than that, I find the background and the character very lacking. MC is magically a grown up with no reincarnation and somehow dueling before even attending school. Most people including pure blood couldn't even cast a Lumos before their first year. I mean you have an eleven years old child mysteriously surving on their own and in what world does that actually happen? Also why is a child behaving more maturely than adults somehow lacks the ability to eat properly with restraints in front of people. Then this child is already seeking power and conquering people in a ridiculous way. Not to mention would antagonize a child that has great wealth, wouldn't it be better to carry favor with them even if it to decieve them?

author will this have romance?..........

Grammar and dialogue needs work. There are a lot of inconsistencies and one annoying thing is that every single spell takes on a flame aspect. It’s okay, but misses a lot to truly be considered great. I would suggest reading reborn as regulus

Could be great, but as always. The authors on this website either make their main character, psychopathic murderers or weak dogs shit flowers

The story is rather mediocre, but it’s worth a read if you have nothing better to do. The author made a mistake with the title — the story should have been called “Black with trembling eyelashes.”

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The story spirals between great and completely inconsistent. It needs a considerably better outline. Events happen then didn’t happen then did. Also the protagonist’s personality shifts like night and day between distrusting child and hardened investigator/ researcher By year two he talks and thinks like someone in their 20s. The story needs work, its got potential for sure. Furthermore there is a version of the same story on RR with slightly different events.

have some minor inconsistencies but doable

seriously this is by far one of the best fanfictions I am reading on Webnovel. I am enjoying nearly everything about it. 1 thing is the MC, though hes not bad, i am confused at times, its like hes smarter or older than he is... but so far there hasn't really been a explanation about it bar the fact he lived on the streets for so long. Also he has a stick up his ass, but that could just be due to his mindset and his main focus on studying magic to identify his special ability. check it out.