This story is trying to do too much in one chapter. We got reincarnation, breaking off marriages, cultivation etc.. without any world building or character dev. An author should not have to (explain parts of the story in the chapter).
The idea of a twin being betrayed and reincarnated originally drew my interest but the writing needs some work.
7 years ago
5
aryle
When will the next chapters be released? Its toryline is good. Lots of twist will be expected? Hoping that a mass release will be done.. been waiting for them.
7 years ago
1
Yeng_Sensei
Good storyline, character design, and world background...
o//3//o.................................................................................
This story is trying to do too much in one chapter. We got reincarnation, breaking off marriages, cultivation etc.. without any world building or character dev. An author should not have to (explain parts of the story in the chapter). The idea of a twin being betrayed and reincarnated originally drew my interest but the writing needs some work.
When will the next chapters be released? Its toryline is good. Lots of twist will be expected? Hoping that a mass release will be done.. been waiting for them.
Good storyline, character design, and world background... o//3//o.................................................................................