True God of Dominance

True God of Dominance

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Author: PontifexSpirit
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What happen when one twin god betrayed the other twin?



Heise Haiyang was reincarnated after being betrayed by his twin brother.



After 1000 years have past, will the world remember Heise Haiyang again?

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Raor2048
Raor2048

This story is trying to do too much in one chapter. We got reincarnation, breaking off marriages, cultivation etc.. without any world building or character dev. An author should not have to (explain parts of the story in the chapter). The idea of a twin being betrayed and reincarnated originally drew my interest but the writing needs some work.

7 years ago
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aryle
aryle

When will the next chapters be released? Its toryline is good. Lots of twist will be expected? Hoping that a mass release will be done.. been waiting for them.

7 years ago
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Yeng_Sensei
Yeng_Sensei

Good storyline, character design, and world background... o//3//o.................................................................................

7 years ago
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