Solo Assassin

It is nice but you should update more and increase you word count . 😊

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Mokel didn't know what hit him– even though he later realized. Lordian, I love this banger of yours, keep the chapters coming.

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"Solo Assassin" is a promising start to a new urban fantasy series. The chapter is filled with action, suspense, and interesting characters, and it leaves readers wanting more. While there are some areas where the chapter could be improved, the author shows a lot of potential, and I look forward to seeing how the story develops in future chapters. If you're a fan of action-packed urban fantasy novels with complex characters and a fast-paced narrative, then I would definitely recommend giving "Solo Assassin" a try.

From the first chapter, I already know this is gonna be a banger! It’s gonna be a fun ride of suspense and action, always having you at the edge of your seat. Amazing plot and characters.[img=update]

Solo Assassin is a story that hooks you right from the beginning with its high stakes and intriguing characters. The dynamic between the brothers, Zhen and Clen, is a highlight, showcasing a mix of tension, humor, and sibling loyalty. Zhen’s cautious nature contrasts well with Clen’s reckless ambition, making their interactions both engaging and relatable. The opening chapters do a great job of setting the stage for what feels like an intense and unpredictable journey. The scene with Mokel and the safe is particularly gripping, packed with suspense and a touch of mystery. I also enjoyed the hints of a deeper plot, especially with Rasto and the dangerous trap—it’s the kind of setup that keeps you turning pages to find out more. That said, the pacing in some parts feels a bit rushed, especially in the first chapter. Slowing down moments like Mokel’s fear or Clen’s desperation could really amplify the tension. Additionally, while the repetitive use of "fatty" for Mokel is meant to describe him, varying the language would make the writing feel smoother and more polished. Overall, solo Assassin is an exciting read with strong character dynamics and a lot of potential. It’s clear that there’s a fascinating story unfolding, and I’m looking forward to seeing where the plot takes Zhen and Clen next. With a bit more refinement, this story could truly shine.

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Solo Assassin is an excellent novel, blending action and suspense with a captivating, complex protagonist. The plot is thrilling, and the writing is smooth, perfect for thriller fans!

I find the stories plot to be very compelling. I love the take on family ties so far. The dangers of an assassin's world so far have kept me very much engaged in what happens next. I can't wait to read more!!!

This story delivers a thrilling blend of action, emotional depth, and personal stakes. Zhen’s struggle to survive in a dangerous world while protecting his estranged siblings and seeking happiness creates a compelling narrative. The tension between his perilous career and his personal desires makes for a rich character-driven tale. With themes of family, love, and redemption, this story has the potential to captivate readers with its heartfelt and high-stakes journey. Fine-tuning the sibling dynamics, Zhen’s career details, and his romantic aspirations could elevate it even further.

the book is interesting and fun, the language is undersatandable.. overall it's a lit

a very nice and interesting story. reason I'm giving it a 4.6 star review is coz of the grammatical errors otherwise, it's a good book

I must say, it is a good read. The characters and everything are explained in good details. The only problem is spelling errors. Apart from that, the book is very good.. I recommend it. Keep up the good work, Author