No cover art a synopsis that is so lacking that it on the verge of being comical. Yet to my surprise I was rewarded with a pretty awesome read. I’m hoping more ppl will take the plunge and read this novel. ANTI - HERO
I hope fingers crossed.
Review pending changes as story continues.
7 years ago
3
Sdir
I give 5. if you want to know why, read it yourself.
( 140 characters....) Slowboslowboaslowboatslowbeat
Great novel premise, i guess??
7 years ago
3
CommanderIpads
I give a 5.
You want to know?
Read it yourself.
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7 years ago
2
Puddingbytes
I will give this story a solid five. It has an interesting System and the fighting scenes were believable in a bare-bones sort of way. I'm interested in seeing if the main character will become an anti-hero like I hope lol.
7 years ago
2
Bethrezhen
Not enough chapters to really say much. But I enjoyed it alot the chapters I read. Just been waiting forever for updates. The story has alot of potential. I have not read enough to comment on character design or story development. Nice description of world background and as I said no updates since I started reading a few weeks ago.
7 years ago
1
Harem_lover
This story seems to posses a lot of potential, however it also seems easy to mess up because of the few hints I got out of the personality of the mc.
Yulio didnt sound like a guy that would use necromancy even in dire strait's which will effect the mc, even thou we don't anything about him yet he also seem to give off the hesitant type vibe which will create inconsistent behaviour, and ruin this supposed masterpiece.
So hope you take that into consideration dear author
7 years ago
1
SaiKirito
Alright this is good, no great enough to pump my curiosity and I'm currently carving for more chap.
The protagonist is really a guy who reads novel for sure and he is an idiot. No I should say he's a gentleman who's asking for gentlemanly stuff which gets my curiosity up a LvL to see if that guy gets a romance(probably will die peeking) and see what he does in the future.
It got action(I believe), game elements(idk which game but its cool) and my favorite part the lord of the dead and master on black magic (which is really f*cking awesome)!
7 years ago
1
1mm0rt4l
I would like to know why it disapear 3 chapters..
There were 5 now only 2.
However its a great story with great foundation and can, in the future be one of the best that I ever read
7 years ago
1
gee_ringdomstories
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to check whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
4 years ago
0
RavensDarckness
je réécrits ma critique vu que l'auteur a reprit l'écriture (j'espère qu'il ne va pas re abandonné ) sinon c'est un super roman en tout ca j'aime bien l'histoire et le contexte du monde et de l'epoque où est le mc ^^
No cover art a synopsis that is so lacking that it on the verge of being comical. Yet to my surprise I was rewarded with a pretty awesome read. I’m hoping more ppl will take the plunge and read this novel. ANTI - HERO I hope fingers crossed. Review pending changes as story continues.
I give 5. if you want to know why, read it yourself. ( 140 characters....) Slowboslowboaslowboatslowbeat Great novel premise, i guess??
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I will give this story a solid five. It has an interesting System and the fighting scenes were believable in a bare-bones sort of way. I'm interested in seeing if the main character will become an anti-hero like I hope lol.
Not enough chapters to really say much. But I enjoyed it alot the chapters I read. Just been waiting forever for updates. The story has alot of potential. I have not read enough to comment on character design or story development. Nice description of world background and as I said no updates since I started reading a few weeks ago.
This story seems to posses a lot of potential, however it also seems easy to mess up because of the few hints I got out of the personality of the mc. Yulio didnt sound like a guy that would use necromancy even in dire strait's which will effect the mc, even thou we don't anything about him yet he also seem to give off the hesitant type vibe which will create inconsistent behaviour, and ruin this supposed masterpiece. So hope you take that into consideration dear author
Alright this is good, no great enough to pump my curiosity and I'm currently carving for more chap. The protagonist is really a guy who reads novel for sure and he is an idiot. No I should say he's a gentleman who's asking for gentlemanly stuff which gets my curiosity up a LvL to see if that guy gets a romance(probably will die peeking) and see what he does in the future. It got action(I believe), game elements(idk which game but its cool) and my favorite part the lord of the dead and master on black magic (which is really f*cking awesome)!
I would like to know why it disapear 3 chapters.. There were 5 now only 2. However its a great story with great foundation and can, in the future be one of the best that I ever read
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to check whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
je réécrits ma critique vu que l'auteur a reprit l'écriture (j'espère qu'il ne va pas re abandonné ) sinon c'est un super roman en tout ca j'aime bien l'histoire et le contexte du monde et de l'epoque où est le mc ^^