Hello this is my first novel, and i hope this will be my first step to become good author. So i will rate my work with my opinion.
I hope you all can enjoy this story and can share with your friend.
:D
7 years ago
4
Calladrena
i think you could be amazing, but you need someone for a grammar check, alot of sentences didnt make sense, keep working and find like 3 or 4 people u can trust to proof read it and give grammatical correction suggestions
Hello this is my first novel, and i hope this will be my first step to become good author. So i will rate my work with my opinion. I hope you all can enjoy this story and can share with your friend. :D
i think you could be amazing, but you need someone for a grammar check, alot of sentences didnt make sense, keep working and find like 3 or 4 people u can trust to proof read it and give grammatical correction suggestions