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I love the idea of this novel. basicly the system/software is awesome and the character's pretty weird but it kinda makes it better. I just hope you try to make the chapters a little longer. Thanks if you make them longer and if you don't ....................../´¯/) ....................,/¯../ .................../..../ ............./´¯/'...'/´¯¯`·¸ ........../'/.../..../......./¨¯\ ........('(...´...´.... ¯~/'...') .........\.................'...../ ..........''...\.......... _.·´ ............\..............( ..............\.............\...

Really bad worldbuilding and characters. The author creates unrealictic reactions to actions. It took a total of 15 chapters to even reach the topic this novel was about. I read this novel in the hopes it would be good but it wasn't.

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As the chapters continue this story becoming a good one will you make shuvam show off his skills more lonely shuvam is like not in there increase your update stability BTW English is my second language too lol

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Good Concept for a novel however the story could have been longer and have more character and world development .

sucks it hasnt created a game after 15 chapters and he created a character with which we bonded and then proceeds to just kill her off i hope authors sufficates in his sleep.............

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i'm sorry i must review this because i need the exp. the truth is i don't know anything about this novel and i'm trying to be modest with 4 star. so, if you don't like what i do then blame qidian for giving such a 'mission'.

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