Pretending to Be an Untouchable Crime Boss

Oh my god, I was searching for copper, got hit in the face by diamond. This is the story I never knew I needed. What a well crafted masterpiece! I really hope to keep observing as the MC gradually falls and hopelessly accepts his grimm position, as in the lasts chapters he tries to burry his enjoyment of it. Keep it up author, this story is gonna pierce the skies!

I give myself a 4 because no novel is perfect, and neither is this one. Let's use this as a Q&A - if you have a question, ask it, and I will try to reply as fast as I can. Thank you all.[img=recommend]

After reading 50 chapters I can confidently say that this is in the top 0.001% Of web novels, I am genuinely shocked that this isn’t in the rankings, all the main characters until now have great character writing- the world building is the weakest part of the novel though I’m sure the author will expand more on this aspect. I can’t believe how much of a hidden gem this is and if this is truly authors first Webnovel then I’m shocked at how great of a storyteller he is. I believe this has potential to be one of the greats, I am a bit worried that there wouldn’t be an overarching plot for the novel, I can’t imagine how difficult it would be to come up with a satisfying ending for the novel though I have faith in you Mszrswrite. Also, I wouldn’t have imagined that you aren’t a native English speaker if I haven’t seen one of your comments on the chapter, you’re actually doing such an amazing job on this. Lastly, you really should put a paywall at a specific chapter. You deserve payment for your work, I would imagine locking at *SPOILER* Lucius’s death would be a good place though I’m not an author so take it with a grain of salt. Author is cooking us a 5 star meal

Very good, one of the best and most unique novels I have ever read, I have read novels with similar plots, but this one is certainly among the best, of course, it has some flaws in the plot, but in itself it is fun to read, thank you very much for the novel.

I really hope this wont get dropped. Its really good, i'm 32 chapters in and i got sad there isn't any more updates. For people on the fence i would say give it 3 chapters that's all it took for me to breeze all available chapters without even noticing the time and that is a great sign.

This is a very unexpected but very good novel recommend

Okay, so far, this one is pretty decent, but I really can't with the dialogue. Most are just too unnatural. Unbearable almost. At times it's good, but in others? Not so much. (Maybe it's just me, I don't know.) A lot of the nicknames are downright cringe, same for how some situations play out. In general, it just feels like a kid dreamed this up, thinking that it was how Mafia bosses acted. But, aside from all of that, the story itself is fun and the writing is better than the average novel on WN. It has mistakes here and there, but those are easily ignored. I can see some obvious effort behind this, which makes me root for the author. Good luck TLDR: It's a fun novel that you shouldn't look too deep into. 3.8/5

I enjoyed the first couple chapters, then the story kept going downhill, - inconsistent characters - everyone from the main characters to the top government officials acts and talks like middleschoolers. - MC is a pretty stupid despite being portrayed to be calculating and "smart" - The author is trying too hard to make it seem that the world is hopeless. - after one event around the chapters 50s (an event that was avoidable if the mc or anyone around him actually had something resembling a working front lob) MC turned completely to a proper insufferable emo. Overall the story was bad, the promise the author gave us with the first few chapters was relatively broken, this no longer was a "misunderstanding" novel.

I love it so far! The story is super engaging, but I feel like the world-building could be a bit stronger. Can’t wait to see where it goes![img=recommend][img=update]

It's different is a good way; Mafia plot: check Scary MC: check Overpowered: check (but not in the usual way) Cute child/Family that keeps MC grounded: check

-Love the book so far -good progression -decent characters PERSONAL ONES⬇️ -wish the mc could be stronger -would be neat if mc would focus on buisness -love the subordinates -i think the little love thing is going on tm -cute kid but tbh i always think of them as a liability -[In total I love the story][keap at it]

Top notch . Keep at it author! ..I need more updates

ridiculously good book. haven’t found a book on webnovel this good in a long time.

Really unique and really good novel, i really recommend it!