Supreme Martial System

Supreme Martial System

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Author: OmnipotentDad
3.83
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Zhong Zhihao, an Orphan due to poverty worked his best, trying to find the parents that had abandoned him.



But when he had finally managed to have the information about his Family, Zhihao, our MC went into a very different twist of fate.



Zhihao was drag into a World, where Power is Law, and Authority is second.



Only the strongest will strive for wealth and women.



But the story goes different, as he not only need to be strong, he needs to be the one who stood at the peak.



Drag into the conflict between Gods and Titans, Zhihao will try to prevent the chaos from happening.



Will Zhihao be able to prevent it? or will he die trying?



Watch as Zhihao, and his comrades struggle in preventing the chaos from happening.



A World where he will build the Greatest Realm.



His path to Godhood with the power of the System, The Supreme Martial System as his Aid.

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OmnipotentDad
OmnipotentDad

Hello everyone, I am the author of this novel. I'm a newbie author that just started yesterday about 16hrs ago, I`m expecting this novel to get to atleast 800+ chapters im currently struggling from making another novel as to avoid having my ideas divided, i wish you guys can support this novel of mine as I am still a newb Thanks!

6 years ago
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L1_a
L1_a

Now to vote with my other accounts ................................................................................................................................................................

6 years ago
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VEGEKU
VEGEKU

Well, I can say Only this that If there was a lower Point that 1 star i would gave it. I personally decided to Drop this novel. This is a Whole collected things of Extreme Spelling and Grammar Problems and mistakes. Writing Style of truly childish and Full of problems, I think that Author doesn't even give a look at his writing to see that what he himself/herself Wrote. and he/she doesn't even has a Plan for his novel. I 100% sure that the Author is a completely newbie not in the way of writing but also novels. I'm truly sure that the number of the novels that he/she read is less than fingers of a hand. Why ? You can see of the messy Background of story messy cultivation path and it's to the situation that i suspect Author doesn't know even the meaning of Cultivation Technique and Cultivation Skill ? MC with Only one Quest will become OP. Author in your Life do you play any game at all for not knowing the Quest how works? The Only good point of novels is it's fast update rate that this itself has caused serious Damage to the Story line. Friend Aliens in Cultivation world? it's OK because it's your novel but try to do it properly. Well at last the ones that want to see a novel of without direction and purpose Read it it's fun in some places anyway I Dropped It maybe you like this novel .

6 years ago
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FishButterfly
FishButterfly

TAGS ......... -Transmigration -Male MC -Stupid MC -Harem -Echhi -System -Cultivation -Kingdom Building -Aliens (OuterSpace) -Humour -Transport Into Other World -Overpowered MC -Sudden Strength Gain -Unpredictable story -Magic and Swords -Teacher -Family

6 years ago
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CH405Kaiser
CH405Kaiser

Slow downonmaking your story development. Also if you’re unsure of writing, you can use grammarly or google drive to help you write. Author needs to decide whether or not his dialogue will contain dialogue quotes or use the actor script dialogue. Even then, author needs to learn how to use dialogue quotes. For the background, as readers we don't need to know everything of the character’s tragic happenings. Limit the background to 1-2 sentences. Don't overly explain why this character does certain actions.

6 years ago
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Murderer
Murderer

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6 years ago
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coffee_is_layfu
coffee_is_layfu

I know that in elementary school. No, not even then. Kindergarten. Yes, in kindergarten, proper capitalization is already taught. [small] for the common nouns and most words [Caps] for the sentence starters and proper nouns, names, etc So, why oh why is this story littered with them? I can't even get past the first chapter. And to note, the first chapter is the one that informs the readers what kind of story they'll be reading. It's the King for first impressions. I even checked some more chaps, and basically author-san, your grammar officially sucks. Or find yourself a good editor. I was browsing through the top ** ranks and randomly clicked you. I would've stayed silent but... You are one of the reasons why most readers here have a bad impression on Original stories.

6 years ago
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Skiadra
Skiadra

I can barely understand what's going on. The author really needs an editor. I like the base concept, but because the English is bad, I can't really enjoy. I stuck with it for a bit, but it became super contrived after a while. Like, even the MC from Strongest System didn't progress this quickly. And none of the characters have any depth to them either. Honestly it feel like a bunch of poorly executed cultivation novel tropes. I can still enjoy that kind of thing on a good day, but the poor English prevents me from even that. I hope this project gets an editor so I can start reading again. I really did like the concept!

6 years ago
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paja
paja

Well english is not my 1 st language so I will not say a word about writing quality, to be honest after 7 chapters i was thinking that this novel will be at last decent. My bad. Its not even aceptable. Its awfull! After 20 chaps mc is already like one of the strongest in this world. Damn, plot without purpose, illogical to the point when author is even writing what he feels in the middle of the chapter. I can't focus on story when there is idiotic sentence from time to time. Whats for + thats the stability of updates. Im droping this one

6 years ago
14
b0ss
b0ss

Not very good at all. But I wish the author would make another novel and fix his mistakes.hdbdndndnfkfkckcjckutjktjtjtjkgkgkggkkggkjffjcmdjdkdndndmdkfmcmfkfkfkfkckkc

6 years ago
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L1_a
L1_a

Me sitting here at 12 pm waiting for the next chapter. God bless America Wait I mean the author Nansen Amana man ns an Mann’s. Amana man man nsns

6 years ago
7
Chained_Soul
Chained_Soul

Maganda yung story especially yung background story ng main character ....……………………………………………………… Keep it up ill be reading your work from now on,,,,,,,

6 years ago
7
schine
schine

What is with this terrible writing? God, how does this even rank fourteenth in the power ranking? I have to say, this is quite disappointing.

6 years ago
6
SKKEN
SKKEN

Even on a really good day I wouldn't read any more of this hot trash. Everyone who says this story is good can go **** themselves, they're all fucking idiots. If given a choice between reading the rest of this and giving it a high rating like all the other slave boys, or being fucking murdered, I would rather have some obese dickhead, tattooed to hell and back, cut my throat open with a fucking dirty meat cleaver.

6 years ago
6
Saint
Saint

Honestly, I gave up, way too much casual way of talk in the novel, I could skip the fact that the grammar is crap, but the fact that everything seems like it comes from a 5y old uneducated brat make it really hard to focus and read, all the "Ah ah ah!!!" and so on at every sentences are really annoying..

6 years ago
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