A game creator, Sarah Johnson, was betrayed by her investor from day one. She had unknowingly signed her creation, Ethura, over to George Luther when she was fifteen. 

Unwilling to give up on Ethura, she decides to enter the game as a player and take control of it from the inside by becoming the most powerful. The thing is, the company had placed her character at a disadvantage from the day they realized she was also playing. 

My skills will only level up after placing double the effort compared to others? At night, my strength will go down by 75%? I smile at the futile efforts. None of this will matter. I had plenty of time to grind and had 100% comprehension of all my skills as I had created them.

NOTE: This story will also be posted on royalroadl

Shadow of Ethura

Wow! I'll be expecting a lot for this story. Be sure to not disappoint us, your readers. Well, I like the summary. What a great start. Be sure to end it well.. (OP is a must heheheh joke... well I like overpowered protagonist cuz they're awesome!! But don't worry, just do your best author! One written story is equivalent to thousand years of longing.) Gambatte, author! FL, don't lose to those bastards that will ruin your future!!! Will support! ^^


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Great story so far. 

I have issues with the premise though, as I doubt a contract signed by a 15 year old would be legally binding. It'd require a guardian, who hopefully would be smart enough to get a lawyer to clear out that loophole. But hey, it's required for the story, so.. meh.

The 'screw you' contract in the game is absolute bull**** though. I'd be taking that public, along with the fact that he screwed her out of her own game. 

The most unbelievable part is actually the conversion from western to eastern, and it seems unnecessary. In a single week they reworked the ENTIRE game from western to eastern? Clearly, she had the capability to see the current game design, so it's hard to understand how this happened without her knowledge. 

Other than that, it's an excellent story. Well written, believable but slightly exaggerated characters, good world building. 
Hopefully you can get back to writing the rest of the story.