Leaning Too Deep
[NOVEL IS UNDER CONSTRUCTION STARTING FROM 6/7/2019 UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE]
If her current body's identity was not conspicuous enough, how about the status of her new sibling or precisely twin? A yellow-haired boy with a pair of three stripes whisker and blue-eyed who shouting dattebayo every second in the last of his sentence. Familiar?
Both of us knew that I was slowly dying. While leaving my husband alone was not my plan, fate said otherwise. I died in my husband's arms and found myself woke up in the body of a baby.
All of the places I got reincarnated, why here? If it were my husband, he would gladly accept it. For me? Hell no! There were too many power-hungry lunatics in there.
Thankfully, my Hyperthymesia followed me to the afterlife, AKA my new life.
Hyperthymesia: a condition in which an individual possesses a superior autobiographical memory, meaning he or she can recall the vast majority of personal experiences and events in his or her life.
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Writing quality is checked with Grammarly, but it might not be perfect. Stability of updates will be twice a week. You can suggest the updating day. As for story development, it will be the slow one. I want to write the Female Lead's childhood thoroughly. I will have some other OC, and some canon character might be a bit OOC.
I believe this is a good beginning and I am excited to see where the story goes. My only complaint is your grammar. I know it is hard to translate from one language to another, especially when it is not your native tongue, so maybe see if you could have someone proof read your work before posting. Even if it's just a friend looking it over, I think that would help make what is happening in the story a lot easier to understand for readers. Definitely a solid start, however, and I hope you keep it up. 😊
This story is one of the most intriguing fanfics on this app. I’m super excited to read more. Also, props to PricklyAlpaca, that cover is awesome.
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I love your cover, and it's quite cute. I suggest you search for proof-reader soon. Please update more chapters every week. Also, is the MC a Female Lead?
I don't need grammar as long as I can understand your story. Finally, I saw Female Protagonist on fanfiction genre, especially Naruto fanfic. You also promise us (the reader) to wreak havoc on the timelines, I'm waiting for it!
Might have been dropped ............................................ Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh it's really good but I want more ....... .... ...