MHA: Absolute Telekinesis
A young boy dies a tragic death and is granted 3 wishes. He chooses to be reborn in MHA with the Telekinesis as his quirk and the potential to achieve Absolute Mastery and Power over his ability.
The MC will be overpowered and there will be some dark elements. The novel will be quite realistic in the context of the MHA world. The MC will be cruel to his enemies and kind to those he cares about. There will be romance and potential for a harem of about 3, but not more than 5.
I plan to continue with this hopefully until the end of MHA canon.
I aim to upload chapters of about 2k words, and I hope people enjoy this fanfic. I'm open to any suggestions and criticism on how I could improve, but please no hate for no reason.
The first few chapters are quite dark, but it gets better after that, so please stick around till then.
MHA and any of the characters in it do not belong to me.
I will try to release a bonus chapter every 1,000 powerstones. Although, it depends on if I have chapters ready.
This is fantastic! It’s the first My MHA fanfic I’ve read with an overpowered MC that still feels grounded and realistic. So many similar stories rely on huge harems and skimp on character development, but yours truly stands out. I really hope you keep writing this until the very end—it’s something special!
Well, there was just 1 review left to get to 10, so I'll follow the tradition and leave a shameless 5 star review. It's my first time writing a fanfic, or anything other than essays and reports, and I appreciate all the love and support so far. Please give it a try of you think you might like it. I've gotten a lot of feedback that the earlier chapters are too full of sadness and despair, which I acknowledge, but there's nothing I can do about it at this point. I just want to let any new readers know that it gets better after chapter 8 and was intended for character development. I'll aim to finish this book, and hopefully most of you will be there with me for the journey. To all my supporters, thanks for reading.
Some of the reviews focus a lot on the first 6 chapters, which I won't lie, yes, they are quite dark, but it's literally just those 6 chapters from there the story develops in an excellent way, it's a powerful character but one that still feels real, with concerns and social problems like anyone else, through so much mediocrity in MHA books I can say that this one easily enters a top 3, it's excellent.
The writing is very good, and the idea had potential, but the execution left a lot to be desired. Everything feels forced, especially the protagonist's childhood, which affects immersion. I’m giving it three stars for the initial concept, but the way suffering is portrayed seems more like the author's indulgence than a narrative necessity. In the end, the justification that "God wanted him to suffer" feels like nothing more than an excuse to exaggerate the drama in a gratuitous and unnecessary way.
Simply unenjoyable. Too much angst throughout most of the story as it is right now.
the story has high writing quality, but the only reason why it's only at 3.2 stars is because I hate when authors use the excuse of "character development" just to make the MC suffer.
dont read this if you dont like tragedy dont read this if you dont like tragedy dont read this if you dont like tragedy dont read this if you dont like tragedy dont read this if you dont like tragedy dont read this if you dont like tragedy
Overpowered Tag Misplaced if your MC aint tank through everything
It's well written. But it is unnecessary dark his parents treat him badly for no reason I guess he was a product of a quirk marriage, if so, they should be feeding him properly. The M.C works with someone who tried to kill him and burnt himself to basically cover for the Hero assassin. His quirk awakens at 12 for no reason other for him to be abuse with no way to retaliate. Then at the part I stop reading he write info he should not be aware of and give it to Nezu and Lady Nagant take him seriously.
This is baaaad the only good thing is that ther is not much grammar mistake the rest? is fuking depressing and forced
Reveal Spoiler
So he for people who are okey with the author lying this would be okay but he didnt get any but one of his wishes. He didnt get his quirk and he didnt get his memory. For anyone who says oh theyll come later. Fuk u. A person developes who they are gradually by growing up to have memories after that (like is depicted here) make them either questions thier exsistence or doubt if they are real. This means he didnt actually get his memories. Because with them he would stay who he was so most if not all of the first 2 chapters dont matter cause even if he gets his memories later he would not be the same person who made those wishes. I also belive the author is deleting reviews thier is no way people would put up with say he get 3 wishes they not giving him the wishes its lame and cheap and u could have done all this without having him reincarnated.
I didn't like it at all. Too much forced drama. Not for me, but maybe someone will like it. The idea was cool, but the execution was not.... Zzzzz
Get past chapter 5, and this is actually Peak 🔥, Keep cooking Author. Cant trust ratings nowadays fr. Made me almost skip this Peak🔥
the story isn't bad by itself but it's basically a white hair red eyes albino who acts like he looks, it 's as cliché of a situation as it sounds