MHA: Absolute Telekinesis

This is fantastic! It’s the first My MHA fanfic I’ve read with an overpowered MC that still feels grounded and realistic. So many similar stories rely on huge harems and skimp on character development, but yours truly stands out. I really hope you keep writing this until the very end—it’s something special!

Well, there was just 1 review left to get to 10, so I'll follow the tradition and leave a shameless 5 star review. It's my first time writing a fanfic, or anything other than essays and reports, and I appreciate all the love and support so far. Please give it a try of you think you might like it. I've gotten a lot of feedback that the earlier chapters are too full of sadness and despair, which I acknowledge, but there's nothing I can do about it at this point. I just want to let any new readers know that it gets better after chapter 8 and was intended for character development. I'll aim to finish this book, and hopefully most of you will be there with me for the journey. To all my supporters, thanks for reading.

Some of the reviews focus a lot on the first 6 chapters, which I won't lie, yes, they are quite dark, but it's literally just those 6 chapters from there the story develops in an excellent way, it's a powerful character but one that still feels real, with concerns and social problems like anyone else, through so much mediocrity in MHA books I can say that this one easily enters a top 3, it's excellent.

The writing is very good, and the idea had potential, but the execution left a lot to be desired. Everything feels forced, especially the protagonist's childhood, which affects immersion. I’m giving it three stars for the initial concept, but the way suffering is portrayed seems more like the author's indulgence than a narrative necessity. In the end, the justification that "God wanted him to suffer" feels like nothing more than an excuse to exaggerate the drama in a gratuitous and unnecessary way.

Simply unenjoyable. Too much angst throughout most of the story as it is right now.

the story has high writing quality, but the only reason why it's only at 3.2 stars is because I hate when authors use the excuse of "character development" just to make the MC suffer.

dont read this if you dont like tragedy dont read this if you dont like tragedy dont read this if you dont like tragedy dont read this if you dont like tragedy dont read this if you dont like tragedy dont read this if you dont like tragedy

Overpowered Tag Misplaced if your MC aint tank through everything

This is baaaad the only good thing is that ther is not much grammar mistake the rest? is fuking depressing and forced

It's well written. But it is unnecessary dark his parents treat him badly for no reason I guess he was a product of a quirk marriage, if so, they should be feeding him properly. The M.C works with someone who tried to kill him and burnt himself to basically cover for the Hero assassin. His quirk awakens at 12 for no reason other for him to be abuse with no way to retaliate. Then at the part I stop reading he write info he should not be aware of and give it to Nezu and Lady Nagant take him seriously.

Reveal Spoiler

Get past chapter 5, and this is actually Peak 🔥, Keep cooking Author. Cant trust ratings nowadays fr. Made me almost skip this Peak🔥

So he for people who are okey with the author lying this would be okay but he didnt get any but one of his wishes. He didnt get his quirk and he didnt get his memory. For anyone who says oh theyll come later. Fuk u. A person developes who they are gradually by growing up to have memories after that (like is depicted here) make them either questions thier exsistence or doubt if they are real. This means he didnt actually get his memories. Because with them he would stay who he was so most if not all of the first 2 chapters dont matter cause even if he gets his memories later he would not be the same person who made those wishes. I also belive the author is deleting reviews thier is no way people would put up with say he get 3 wishes they not giving him the wishes its lame and cheap and u could have done all this without having him reincarnated.

This story is different from what I usually read, and I’m really enjoying the unique approach. One of the things I appreciate most is how the author has made the MC feel humane and vulnerable rather than just another generic protagonist. What I Like About the Story • A Realistic, Emotionally Complex MC • The protagonist isn’t just enduring his suffering blindly—he breaks down, questions his circumstances, and struggles with his emotions, which makes him feel real. • Instead of being an overpowered, emotionless character, he actually feels pain and reacts to it in a believable way. This adds a strong emotional depth to the story. • Engaging Storytelling • The way the author portrays the MC’s journey keeps me invested. • The emotional struggles and internal conflicts make the story even more compelling. A Few Thoughts • The MC has gone through extreme suffering in both his first and second lives, and the way he questions his reality and breaks down is handled well. • While I do appreciate his resilience, it could be interesting to explore how his experiences shape his long-term mindset even further. Final Thoughts This is a well-written and emotionally gripping story. The way the MC is portrayed makes him feel real, and his struggles are genuinely engaging. I’m looking forward to seeing how his journey unfolds!