Elementals: Fire and Wind

Elementals: Fire and Wind

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Author: BelaDona
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Take an adventure together through a world where the elements run through everyone's body. Where people share a bond with nature that comes from birth. Raven and Hawk Evergreen are two prodigal twins trying to make it through the world. But everything is not always as picture perfect as it seems. Nothing is ever easy.

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Well, the story is good but some sentences is vague, it feels incomplete like caramel colour to olive something? It feels vague but my instinct tells me its the eyes since Raven's brother hair color has been explained. 😂 so yeah, some sentences feels off and I almost cry about Raven's mother case. Try a little to explain so it's clear for us. Well, the story is good but my instinct tells me Raven and her brother is the reincarnation of the legends in the storg 😂😝

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