i didn't really get the first joke
but the other ones were good
i look forward that you will continue with new other ones in way that the genre that you chose is disliked here in webnovel
6 years ago
1
Ese_Christopher_8096
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5 years ago
0
hnylover
Kfup gifts jfhcjv u jguvjvu ufmvuv ufjjv b vjh uu gd jufhl yeh le ra and a friend who will come and go and go and go to bed and go to sleep a day and go and see what they use for their wedding anniversary or tm and 4 day to day to day care for the treat and the kids voices and the kids who are in the same boat as if they were a little more than a couple of years ago and I was just trying to get a job in a city like the city in my house in my own town in my hometown that they had been doing it all year and they were going for the holidays to get rid of the food 33rd annual dinner me in the kitchen and I was a bit worried that I was a fan and the only way you can do that was
5 years ago
0
Kmiller98
The spelling made it hard to read. I couldn’t continue on. You misspelled words like “Athlete” and “nurse”. I know some people have trouble spelling, but you might benefit from an editor.
5 years ago
0
yw740030
It was ok. But if you want funnier stories, visit here!
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=XHL1_rYTIpk
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5 years ago
0
ThouIsHorrible
Its okay. The characters are very not not funny not funny funny. Its a funny novel. But it needs more chapters. Even though the novel might be new I suggest that you make 10 chapters before you actually release your novel. Think about it, you can go back and chech your spelling after you release your chapters.
i didn't really get the first joke but the other ones were good i look forward that you will continue with new other ones in way that the genre that you chose is disliked here in webnovel
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Kfup gifts jfhcjv u jguvjvu ufmvuv ufjjv b vjh uu gd jufhl yeh le ra and a friend who will come and go and go and go to bed and go to sleep a day and go and see what they use for their wedding anniversary or tm and 4 day to day to day care for the treat and the kids voices and the kids who are in the same boat as if they were a little more than a couple of years ago and I was just trying to get a job in a city like the city in my house in my own town in my hometown that they had been doing it all year and they were going for the holidays to get rid of the food 33rd annual dinner me in the kitchen and I was a bit worried that I was a fan and the only way you can do that was
The spelling made it hard to read. I couldn’t continue on. You misspelled words like “Athlete” and “nurse”. I know some people have trouble spelling, but you might benefit from an editor.
It was ok. But if you want funnier stories, visit here! https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=XHL1_rYTIpk Funny funny Funny funny Funny funny Funny funny
Its okay. The characters are very not not funny not funny funny. Its a funny novel. But it needs more chapters. Even though the novel might be new I suggest that you make 10 chapters before you actually release your novel. Think about it, you can go back and chech your spelling after you release your chapters.