The Legend of Astan's Queen

The Legend of Astan's Queen

Fantasy47 Chapters673.7K Views
Author: neha_
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He Jian and He Mei Ya, known as "Evil siblings", leaders of the Gui assassination sect are killed in an explosion in one of their mission. They wake up to find themselves in the bodies of brother and sister of He family abandoned in woods. Realizing that they are in a different world full of magic, and the bodies of original owners are bullied and labelled as 'trash' by young masters of other clans, they wow to each other to shake this new continent.



You guys think you bullied us.. bullshit.. we will show you what bullying truly is...You think you are rich.. look at our He family's new business.. what?... now you are not even the worth of dust under our shoes... Crown Prince and Crown Princess.. You cancelled your engagement with us.. We will make you know what regret is.. Yes.. We will make every single one of you know what regret truly is..



The Elder brother He Jian and his sister He Mei Ya make their mark in this new cultivation world and their hidden forces shakes everyone.. making He family untouchable... Both the siblings meet with various strong cultivators on their journey of magic, martial arts,.....specially the charming and domineering two-faced He Mei Ya.. with her powers she becomes a pristine lotus in the hearts of many..



Their lives are changed completely when He Mei Ya accidentally releases purple eyed devilishly handsome man and her destiny becomes entangled with his for eternity...



A road of journey of family.. friendship... love... watch as the siblings along with the evil-doer change the future of entire realm with our little He Mei Ya as the little queen of the black-bellied evil-doer.

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aimej
aimej

"My Beautiful Commander" brought me here. Seriously, I have truly become a fan of Neha's writing. It might have a bit of the same permises as her other stories but each one of it developes into its own beautiful stories. Keep up the great work! I am enjoying myself reading this. Hope you won't drop any of your stories. ๐Ÿ˜Š

6 years ago
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Shontan
Shontan

I thoroughly enjoyed myself yet my heart is laden with regrets ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜ข Dear author, you broke my heart because you paused this novel ๐Ÿ˜ข I have read Jun lan and although it's also awesome, i must say this one is unbeatable! ๐Ÿ˜ข come back soon, so my broken heart will mend

6 years ago
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Skywolf_1
Skywolf_1

I started reading it after my beautiful commander But I liked this one more it has unique plot with good characters It can be developed in a very good way because of its story/world background ,I specially like the brother more I hope you can continue writing this one

6 years ago
4
Nikia_Dren
Nikia_Dren

I absolutely love this story so far I couldn't not read till the end because it's such a great story just like there other novels especially because it has such a strong willed MC.

6 years ago
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ma556676wang956
ma556676wang956

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4 years ago
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Aicha_Hamidou
Aicha_Hamidou

I really wish this story was better written. The poor grammer and sentence structure detracts so much from the story. Please do better author๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

5 years ago
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khyle19
khyle19

Im also like the story of my beautiful commander..but why is the nxt chapter not released..and its killing me to wait the nxt chapter again...

5 years ago
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azurebell
azurebell

Absolutely loved it. Every part of the story is intriguing. This book is much better than the rest. Very unique story with great characters. Brother and sis transmigrating is new to me and I like it their love and concern for each other and their interactions their story truly melts my heart and different magical beings along with the old ancient outlook...truly outstanding how all this blend in with each other in the story is truly commendable. The story indeed is different and interesting. Hope you can finish this story sooner.

6 years ago
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Humayra_Prapti
Humayra_Prapti

journey of two siblngs from modern to ancient era. love and compassion between families. face slapping enemies.conquer all hurdles came to their path

6 years ago
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Rebizxx
Rebizxx

๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ™‚โ˜บ๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ™‚โ˜บ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜šโ˜บ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜šโ˜บ๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡

6 years ago
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jojojoan
jojojoan

I started reading this after the beautiful commander , this is soo nice ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ than the other stories of Neha. Even I have become a fan of Nehaโ€™s writing โœ๏ธ skills. This story could be developed amazingly..

6 years ago
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Csisiko
Csisiko

๐Ÿ’–Love this I couldn't get enough of this so I read it over again. I really love the siblings ๐Ÿ˜‹. Love the relationship of the grandpa๐Ÿ˜‚

6 years ago
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biggsNas
biggsNas

This story is great!!! The story is moving smoothly. Very easy to understand. The characters are amazing and bold. God bless the author ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

6 years ago
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No_one_here
No_one_here

Love the sibling bond and the shamelessness of some of the characters.Wonderful story so sad its on pause for right now................hopefully the author can be back soon!!!!

6 years ago
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S_bhanu
S_bhanu

dear neha... i really love your novel...starting is same but each novel leads to another level of drama storylines.. i love it this one is 3rd of your novels that I'm reading and i love them all.

6 years ago
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