Questing System

Fantasy29 Chapters325.9K Views
Author: Ekeriel
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Icarus made a choice, leading him to a mistake. A mistake which cost him almost everything that was dear to him. He died wishing for redemption and in death, he was offered a choice again. 'As with every choice, you pay a price and gain a privilege'. Will Icarus be able to afford the privilege or will he pay the ultimate price?



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God_1
God_1

Please learn how to make paragraph breaks. Secondly learn how to format novels. People don't usually just oh yeah he knew about it all along. Maybe make him discovering the system first then him using the system second. Thirdly, explain what the hell is going on because I am confused.

6 years ago
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4 years ago
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BaiLouYin
BaiLouYin

I think this is gonna be a good story. I hope the author post more chapter's so I can make a good review about this story... Is this the same like other gaming system? Or a new way of gaming system? I hope this story would be known to others...

6 years ago
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jackjackattack
jackjackattack

Im so confused the author said the first chapter was "not much action," but he got earth, water, wind, and beast affinity. He also got swordsmanship (master) and Prediction (master) and some stats. I'm really wondering what a lot of action looks like. If you mean not a lot of action by like fighting people, then forget it because rn he is in a farm not some kind of place were you fight all the time. I mean you could have the farm animals attack him, but now you cant because of the beast affinity. I really am wondering what action it is going to be. Keep on going on this novel!

6 years ago
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