"Not even the gods can stop me from finding my family!"
Max only wanted to reunite with his parents and sister. But for that, he had to awaken a class.
With no high expectations, Max would’ve been satisfied with a C or D rank.
But fate had other plans. He unlocked a legendary SSS-Rank class.
[Dimensional Keeper]
This class changed everything.
Max mastered every skill to perfection and grasped the Concepts of Space and Time while his peers were playing around with swords.
In no time, he ascended to become the Keeper of the Universe. Armed with unimaginable power, Max’s journey to find his family had begun.
Nothing could stop him now—not fate, not enemies, not even the mighty gods!
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I will give the 5 star it deserves... Read it you will come to love it.
So, shin, you named him Max because he maxes everything? Please tell me that's not the case 😭🙏 Anyway, based on the free chapters, the story is surprisingly good and enjoyable. Worth a read if you’re into stories with an OP MC and harem📚🥂 Before I go back to my cave, I wanna ask again.
The mc intelligence in questionable, but everything else is interesting.
I had read the previous works of the author. the author is good at creating the proper world with proper systems although in the ICC he makes it a little jumbled it has good world building, so you can trust the author with this. As of 50 chaps we don't know much about the World i guess it will be explored in volume 2 that has just started. As for characters that are introduced till now seems to be more fleshed out and fresh than his recent work which is one of his cons and he tried to improve it in this. Also i wish the characters that were introduced next will have that much depth. Writing quality also has significantly improved than the previous works. One selfish wish from me that just doesn't leave the plot points and stories points as you did in the ICC like fate and god things. Connect the story points and don't drag it like that. that's my review on it, thank you for your books and please don't drop it like the previous books😂😂
I should have probably put this as a review for the author's other novel, but since it's been dropped now (rip) I thought it better to multitask and try to promote this new novel somewhat. Anyway, it's good so far. I love how you seriously seem to have taken feedback from your first work and improved your writing; it is much more sleek and nice to read, the story seems to know where it's going, and while the book is far from perfect, I've enjoyed binge-reading it the past day (although do note this could mean i am writing this with some recency bias). Now, why the low(ish) ratings? Well, because I think it's better if I'm fair and actually give feedback as opposed to slapping 5 stars on everything, and giving lower ratings allows easier comparison to see how I actually think the different aspects of the story stack up against each other. Writing quality is 4 stars, so good there. My loose criteria for 5 stars is to impress me in some way. Either teach me a new word, consistently use vivid descriptions, use a couple of semi colons etc. Story development is 3 stars because first of all, it's still early, and secondly, while executed pretty well the story isn't super original so far - not that it has to be in order to be good. Same sort of thing for character design. Average, sometimes unrealistic characters, with no impressive or difficult to portray personalities so far. Updating stability got a 4 because it's still early and as a criterion for a review it makes little sense. World background is 3 cause it's decent so far, but again the story is in its nascent stages, and a bit derived. Show me something new. Doesn't have to be crazy. Even something that isn't new, but not normally seen in this genre; that's how i give a good score for world background. Of course if you have any questions at all or want any more feedback/further explanation (and that goes for others reading this as well as the author) I'd be happy to answer. Good luck, I'm enjoying so far
Pretty good so far, the mc isn’t annoying. The side characters aren’t annoying. There’s no rushed romance so far which is a plus. So far there hasn’t been any young master tropes, which if there is some in the future I don’t mind since it gives a little spice here and there even though people dislike it. Keep up the good work author
Overall this novel is an ok read. This is strictly my opinion. The grammar is good, and world-building is also ok. The author does well in an oversaturated genre. Where the novel falls short for me is the fights. They lack any type of imagination. They are so basic. He swings, he dodges, etc. It is such a bother to read a novel where the author gives the MC crazy talents just to regulate him to elementary-type battle scenes. Again overall the novel is ok. If you can look past the inflated amount of skills and lacking imagination in the fight scenes you wull definitely enjoy the read.
I made it to chapter 5 before knowing I couldn't keep going. MC gets the option to speed up time and spends 3 years in an empty white space training a single skill. and there is zero mention of the mental strain that would impose on his psyche. I fully understand it's early to write a review, but it seems very half hearted writing to not take things like that into consideration, and it doesn't seem worthwhile to continue reading further if that is what will happen throughout the story.
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The beginning was alright, the story definitely took a minute to really find its groove though - but once it did, it hasn’t fallen out and has been pretty consistently great!
Writing skill is really questionable.There are too many abstract things. Explanation of a situation is not quite right. Writing same thing again and again.
One of the best books I’ve ever read, definitely recommend it, the writing style past chapter 300 especially is amazing and I would say better than a lot of well known published books
Absoloutely one of my favorite novels so far only issue I’ve had kinda is the slow pace of the story I’m on chap 300 and it feels like no more than a year has passed so far in the novel but I’m still reading cuz I love this story at least the author posts 4 chaps everyday which keeps me content but the chapters are too kinda short they’re each like half a chapter
Author if you dare drop this novel i will find you and i will make you pay🙃 cause this one of the best OP mc novel and breathtaking novels i've read. So don't you dare even think about dropping it
so far it is a great story and I look forward to many more chapters.