Tournament Master

A greatly compelling story. So far it's on the introduction stages so I won't judge on world/character building issues, but from what I can understand this will be a cultivation story of a prodigy guided by an old master whose close to death. A couple small edits could be made for better readability, but all in all, it's a good read.

Hey Asho, your novel is quite interesting. I have some suggestions for you, regarding the writing (mine is not very good, but here are some tips I guess) I like the story and the world building. I like your ideas, and it's nice for a casual read. Try to keep your tense consistent. It's sometimes a bit confusing for people to read. Always use proper capital letters while writing. It will look a lot nicer, and your writing will seem much more pro (lol) I will PM you some other things on discord when I have time! Keep it up. Try to post longer chapters! I want MOREEEEEE! Leaf

I've only read the first chapter and other than a few small edits that i would make, the writing and grammar is fine and the story is good enough.

Hewwo! author here. this is my first novel on this site so please enjoy it! I take criticism, constructive of course. and yeah, 140 wordsssssssssssssss

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.