Yours, Ours, Us
Zhao Ling always wanted nothing more than to live a peaceful life independently. However, on a fateful day, she somehow gets transmigrated to the the past. Not any normal ancient civilization though. One that uses spiritual powers. Zhao Ling wants to do everything she can to just go back to her time, but yet, she can't.
Somehow, she came to regain memories and started to pursue through all kinds of troubles to finally someday have everything go back to normal. Wei Qiang, her husband has lost his memories, but he stays stuck to her no matter what. Many kinds of troubles come and Xia Lin solves them with triumph.
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Preview on the story...
On a fine day, Xia Lin's ex-boyfriend comes to greet her. Xia Lin had been with Xiao Qiang for the day showing him the modern world.
"Hey! Ling Ling nice to see you again. Want to-ahh my eyes!"
Xiao Qiang pulled her into a deep kiss in front of her ex with a triumphant smirk that seems to say, "Hmph! I win."
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At a party, in the restroom, Xiao Qian pulled her into a kiss.
"Xiao Qian, we are at a party."
He pulls out his sad and cute puppy eyes, "But all the men were staring at you."
"Sigh... What am I going to do with you. Your too unfair Xiao Qian."
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After Xia Lin came back from work, she found that Little Tan was missing.
"Honey, where is Little Tan?"
"I sent him to spend time with Father Liu."
"Wh-mph!"
Xiao Qian pushed her down to the bed and started to kiss her. "I need time with you too."
Is it just me or does this story resemble Doomed To Be a Cannon Foddler too much?? The sequence of events and characters are so alike except the fact that doomed to be a cannon foddler was written well
I’m sorry to do this, as I’m usually all for supporting original stories BUT I can totally see that practically 90% of your story is modeled off the book “Doomed To Be Cannon Fodder” (炮灰女配) by Whistling Night Rain (潇潇夜雨). You’ve tried to add your own plot twists to make it seem different but I’ve read all your chapters here to be sure and yes, you’ve basically ripped off most of the storyline from the original novel. I don’t want to be a tattletale or whatever but it’s just not right that you’re claiming this to be an original story when it’s not. 😕
Hey, author here! I'm sorry if sometimes the chapters disappears. Sometimes the release order is wrong, so I wanted to make sure it's in order.
I'm not yet read the story and just see one review about this story similiar with 'doomed to be cannon fodder' i wont judge, but i think i will add this to my library first to see the plot, theres 32 chapter still ongoing so hope the plot will get better(?)
I’m sorry about the bad review but I feel like this is just a less detailed version of doomed to be canon fodder. The characters , plot and everything else seems the same.
Good one...!!!! Can be better..!!!!
See every author have their own view of story...from other readers maybe this story are similar to the story you have read before but for my view this is still have it own remark and remarkable story.😍
It was good I love the synopsis but the story is confusing. It didn't give much details on how and why it happened this way. You had to guess and of you don't have extensive background on isekai and reincarnation and world travelling and other stuff connected to this story you won't get it. Anyway that was a good one.
Its entertaining to read the story u wrote i hope you write more and more in deep but it's ok it's me happy to read some more stories it's helps past the time so thank you author for your hardwork
I like it so far.....let's continue to read.......how maybe different from other transmigration love story.... I hope to be romantic enough to read second time.
Interesting read but not very original. I agree it reminds me of another novel. I like that this is a short read. I like that the chapters are not locked.
Not a good novel totaly copy pasted..... no proper story development and character design.... flow of story is abrupt no contunuation at all 🙄🙄🙄
There are grammar mistakes for sure.. but, the story is good.. I think everyone can’t understand this.. people who already follow cultivation stories can understand
At first I am interested to read this story. But after a few chapter it start to feel like I am reading a slightly different but still the same "doomed to be a canon fooder". I love that story so i kinda felt disapointed when I read this story coz the opening is the same. Too much similarity. I don't know if it would develope into an original story ltr on.. I hope that the author could please think a way to change it into an original idea... or is this a fanfic crossover alternate universe genre😉
umm.. how should I say it but this is like the bad version of the DCF. story is all over the place, they are not connected at all and character design is halfassed and the plot is confusing. I don't know what you wanted to write but I didn't like this at all