Rebirth of the Heavenly General

Greetings my reader, the author here. Just like many authors who reviewed their own work, i shall also do the same. And for those of you, since i am the author, i shall be biased and give my story a five star rating. Onto the story and as it is kind of a spoiler, read at your very own discretion. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . The MC, General Yang will be reborn. As he is a more than a thousand years old, meaning he is wise plus he is a General so his is also intelligent and cunning and what not a general possesses. Even though i am just a teenager, i will try my best to show a wise character doing wise things... Mc wont be hot headed and simply kill any offenders, naw dawg. Death is an easy way out. What i like is making people's lives miserable and that is what the mc is going to do, making their life miserable. They offenders would seem happy now but it will only be a fleeting moment. And as for those who think that cutting the weeds from the roots, my ideology is "if i kicked your ass once, i can always kick it again" One last thing, the mc, even though is an immortal will have a golden finger and if you think that it will make him toooooo op, think again, after reading a few chapters. That brings me to another thing, and this is the last thing, mc will be op cuz it is really frustrating for reincarnated peeps to be weak and have no pair of balls. I really hate that so the mc will be op and not op in a sense that he will beat and solve everything with fist. When there is a need of fist, it will be used and where there isnt, it wont be. I am just giving a few points about my novel as a heads up for my future readers. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Story is average so far, some misspellings here and there but nothing to noteworthy. I'll wait for the cultivation part since that is usually what determines the quality of such a novel, hopefully it's interesting.

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I like strong mc and what made me interested is our mc is giving chance for rebirth after he sacrificed his life in heaven realm. Then the next arc makes me want to read more how will he facing his new life as royal family with full of scheme especially that concubine and lastly I want to know how general will falling in love with female lead aka lady in armor 😶

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I will change my review when the story really begins but for now many elements in the novel have been derived from other novels.......................................

The MC reborn-same as other novels The MC got special eye-same as some translated novels The MC got betrayed-same as most of the popular novels

The story is good but I don't like the author for begging power stones,one should give provide the power stone at their own initiative whether they want to support it or not,it must be their wish...........................

What can I say the only way this story gets better is with more chapters So I advise starting this now you going become an addict that bugs the author begging for your next fix .. I kind of wish this bugger started writing a few months ago even a year so I could binge

I’m excited for the rest...it’s freaking good ......................................................................................................................................................................................................

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