Fear and numbness engulfed me as I gazed on certain death given form in a black hole. I watched as the world around me vanished, as everything turned dark, and as I woke up in a child's body......wait what?
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YEAAAAAAAAAAHHHH a new chapter I'm so glad you're the best. I like the idea and you are a good author please never give up on writing is just the start of the history but I forsee a very good story.
merge the gamer ability with ben ten i said great job write the next please it's so interesting. ben ten is a good story material and i love the verse so thank for write a fanfic with.
I really like this beginning and as a high school student having grown up with Ben 10 (The original huh, not their new version that I think nobody sucks) I REALLY look forward to seeing more.
Please keep up the good work and please update more because I really enjoy the ben 10 show so I'm really looking forward to see how this turns out btw are you going to make this different than the show of so I really look forward to it
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This is good. I can’t find something wrong in the way you are handling this novel. I would like for some extra chapters if I’m being honest though. Keep it up!
Honestly best start for a ben ten story I have seen so far but I finish there was more chapters. It's really good so far looking forward to more :)
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MC awoke as Ben Tenbar and with awakened my gamer powers. Watch me leave my mark behind on the universe and perhaps even more. I am Ben Ten The Gamer I love idea of two of my favorite Ben Ten and Gamer! I love story and al but 1 year and no update unfotunatly Droped!? ):
This is nice. Shows lots and lots of promise. Few mistakes here and there, but everyone makes mistakes. Love the gamer power. Even if i gotta say, it's overused. Still never gets old.