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Wow! This story was pleasantly surprising. Personally I found it quite interesting and the characters were very intriguing. Overall the plot and story are great. I think the only downside is the pace of the story considering I feel it’s pretty slow-paced.

Its very intriguing and the small pums added into it is even more fun to read it, you can get a little giggle out of it. The overall aprey is very fun and creative. Im excited to read more about this book. Its even more captivating because i could realte to many parts of the book except the whole powers part. I highly recommend this book to other people.

isn't it going to update? i miss it already author at least give a reply!

You broke the fourth wall in the first chapter... Lol XD Do I really have to write 140 characters??? Ugh ;-; Okay, well I do like how unique this book is compared to other books on this website, and how silly and fun this book is. It's almost like a parody of every stupid trope in books you can read. I hope that there will be action and more depth to the story later, but I think the story does just fine, as it is. Don't get me started on the plot synopsis LOL

My favorite thing about this book so far is the humour in it. Both the characters and narration are pretty good. It's pretty entertaining and I'd recommend people to read a few chapters before they decide to drop it. Good Job so far author!

Ahh... okay first of all wow HAHAHA I can't okay you beat my expectations and I... I'm speechless okay HAHAHAHA I can't say a words your story is just phenomenon okay I'm going now.

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The author releases 3-4 chapters a day. His writing quality is phenomenal, though... soemtimes he writes a bit weird, but it adds a bit of flavor into the story. Why does every chapter starts off with Steven?

Surprised that it’s somewhat good, because the beginning felt a bit slice of life, then it started to pick up around chapter 7. Kind of crazy how it’s slowly getting more and more fast paced.

Well, I think this novel is pretty good, really liked the educational aspects hehe. I think this story could get really interesting! One piece of advice is that the first chapter introduces too many characters. I think you were too overly ambitious. Overall, looking forward to more!

Honestly, I thought it was going to be stereotypical, but it's a breath of fresh air. The story could be a lot more fast-paced, and some parts are a bit boring/tedious to read. Really loving the idea so far! Looking forward to more.

This novel is not the typical novel you'll find in Chinese Fantasy. It is very slow paced- at least at the beginning. Updates will be frequent, three times every day, but if I get distracted... one or two sorry. I get distracted reading a lot. Also when the school year starts- expect one or two chapters every two days, and so about 2/3 chapters during the weekday and 4-8 chapters during the weekend. So at best 11 chapters a week sorry. For now, it's about 18 chapters a week. I don't want characters to be static, so although most characters will have a few quirky definable traits, you'll notice that they... change. WOW. The story is a balance of silly stupidity and Melodramatic-ness for no reason. If you're looking for face smacking... maybe later in the novel, but not everyone in the actual world is a rude idiot. Only maybe 1 or 2 people every so often. And not everyone is evil and deserves to die. The mc won't kill for no reason. This is the first book of a series, which is why it need's such heavy world building. But I will tell you this... the story does involve a whole lot about life and death.

The title was quite unique and the synopsis. Ive never encountered this kind of story before with that amazing flow of the characters involve. Good job author!

4.9 rating, but I'm rounding up. The novel has some good parts, but in the beginning, it can be a bit slow. I like how the author writes though. Excited to see more.