The Supreme God System
Destiny is different for everyone, to some it brings happiness and to other sorrow.
This is my story, the story of my fight against my destiny. A fight to know the truth about myself. A fight to get everything I ever wanted in my life. A fight to achieve whatever I ever dream off.
This my story, how a sudden accident changed my life and open the unknown secrets of my life.
I am Spark Hunter and this is my story.
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the novel consist of different realms, i will first start with modern day and make changes and improvement further. 3 chapters are available/per week.
if power ranking goes up than their will be bonus chapters
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The premise of this novel is alright, but the execution leaves much to be desired. First of all the grammar, I wouldn't be surprised if I was told that this was written by a child on lsd. There is just too much to fix that if I went into detail it would take me all day. Either find an editor or run your chapters through a spelling/grammar check online. The novel is quite alright, but it's near impossible to read because of all the grammatical errors.
I am trying my best so if you like it please vote๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Isn't this practically almost exactly same as "Leading System"? Even the premise is almost literally same. Plagiarism? Heck it even had the investment skill and everything else. If I could, I would rate it 0/5 Learn to be creative instead of copying somebody else work.
Grammar it's so bad that it's hard to read it. Basically it seems like it's been written by a child who doesn't know any English or it's his second language. The story promise is good but the execution is not right.
Not worth the read. Grammar mistakes everywhere. 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...1
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You are literally copying Supreme Martial System, even the name. You copy so hard that it's basically plagiarism and it's sad because you have no originality , grammars horrible, your story has literally the same plot, even character development and cultivation is copied.
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Yo dude nice one !!! Looking coool your novel is very interesting story. Maja aa gya.. Badua deta hu ki tujhe contract mile croro ka... Good luck for your future and keep it up.. Nice concept ,good cover page, nice story everything is good man..
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Wow amazing story tha character spark really an awesome guy.... I hope your story can beat the target of top 10 doists......................................
Great read! Give it a go and you'll get stuck to it like glue! ....................................................................................