I Was Hoping She Would Notice but again Now When She Did... Im Tired
BURN ME ALIVE IF YOU DIDN'T LIKE THIS BOOK...AFTER READING THAT IS
Regressing back in time after sacrificing his life for someone undeserving someone who didn’t even shed a tear after his death just total blank.
The person he begged for love rejected him every single time.
Now, he returns to when he was 18 again.
Looking at her face, he wants to try again, to fall in love with her once more, to want to... but no, he no longer wants to feel that pain again.
Some feelings never change, but you have to leave them behind, right? And one life should be enough to try.
He made a commitment to never love her again. This life is his chance to live for himself.
But who knew he wasn’t the only one regressed?
The ultimate black heart curse is broken... and time reverses.
Avey: “Lucy, can we.” Tears in her eyes.
Lucy: Looking blankly at him.
Avey: “Can’t you at least give me one chance?”
Lucian: Silently looking at her.
what about other people who hurt him too: mother, sister, friend and ofc her
Will he give up on love for his own peace, or will he be too afraid to feel that pain again?
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Additional Tags: Regression, Time Travel, Yandere, CEO Girl, Mafia, Family Conflicts, Mother’s Failure, Revenge, Heartbreak, Sacrifices, Unworthy Love, Beautiful Love Story, Strong Characters, Loki
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I love the story, even if it feels like it just started I love it, I can’t wait for more, i normally never comment but i really do like this story so far.
I'm really enjoying this novel, nowadays all novels seem the same, but fortunately this one is a needle in a haystack and I'm loving every chapter. My English is bad sorry rs, 😁🇧🇷
I've read up to chapter 33 and you're story is such a tearjerker. Please tell me he finally gets a happy ending.
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A five star review because it has good story line different from others books and good characters development and of course how well the author has given his emotions to each characters
Story is very promising I would recommend for people to try it
Synopsis honestly couldn’t have done a better job at getting me to read this story the is one big mess of emotions it’s hard not to be captivated hope author doesn’t stop this anytime soon and mc gets the good ending he deserves keep it up author!
I have read up to chapter 109 n here is my honest review — god dam y is the mc being a slave of the system... no matter how you look at it the system is playing with mc and other emotions... you can say that it might be other entities that regressed the other characters but the mc system at least needs to explain the situation of the fate and plot being altered.... in mc first life he suffered due to plot and fate bullshit and not that in his second life where there is no such thing the system didn't explain clearly. if you want us to hate the female characters then don't bring up the plot and fate thing. even if you do don't leave plot Holes or maybe spoiler like you did went mc remove his sister's memory and system clearly said that she will only be affected for one life... by this point I think the system is clearly evil enjoying our mc suffering and show with his girlfriend. also you repeat words and sentences too much but even with all of this I still enjoy the roller coaster, though i enjoy harem but this one is also good... so a question celes or Ava or both or rose or all....
I don't have too much of a problem with the book, the plot and everything is spot on except the main character. The main character that is lucien is poorly written. How can someone involved in the making of one of the most feared gangster groups in the world not be able to control their emotions when they are sent back to being a teenager. Worst of all he claims to have God tier acting skills bestowed by a sysytem but can't hide his emotions well
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Hey, okay.... so I don't like this book but how do I burn you alive??? Thats what I wanna know?? Hey, okay.... so I don't like this book but how do I burn you alive??? Thats what I wanna know??
I'm not speaking bad about your novel but it's copy-paste from manga I read once
if not harem then this novel is shit 🤬 every girls need to be in his harem
Man, although I haven't read the novel yet, I'm so happy you succeeded, from Luckypisces on discord
The beginning was interesting but felt like it drug on for too long. However the more recent chapters have been very engaging and leaving me waiting for more!
(TLDR) If you like stories that are angsty with emotional turmoil and anguish; You'll like this. I have only so far read up to the 34th chapter; (That's when premium starts) but with I have read so far I'm rather pleased with. Writing Quality: 4/5 Some grammatical errors and parts of the story where immersion might break due to errors. But overall very good. Stability of Updates: 5/5 Contracted (Meaning stable updates) Story Development: 3/5 As I have only read up to the 34th chapter I don't know much; but with what I've seen with so far I'm pleased with. The beginning of the story was a bit unique and should've been developed a bit more (my opinion) before the plot had actually started. It was still very well set up so kudos to you author. (I'm also a fan of the genre of novels that this novel takes inspiration from so I love what they're doing here.) Character Design: 2/5 (This also might be dependent on your own personal opinion.) As much as I love the Tragedy and Angst; when the protagonist and the cast are having interactions with each other with the Unique Twist that the story has, it makes the theme of hidden burdens and regrets seem forced. Also the other thing that brings it down massively to me is the Flawed nature of the Characters (Logically Flawed) Otherwise the author did a great job at making the MC and cast people with character flaws. Overall I have a love/hate for the MC. Still very enjoyable to read about nonetheless. World Background: 4/5 Pretty good world building. Slowly but surely as you progress through the story you get to understand the world better. Thank you if you read this :) Overall very much so a "hidden gem" to some. Depending on your taste you'll either like it or not. It definitely has parts that might affect you emotionally. There are also many other stories that have a similar setting to this one if you like this story. SPOILER The logical flaw that I disliked is the fact that when everyone returned the the past, how they just somehow don't realize that the other characters might have regressed too. It seems like a major plot hole as these character's actions sometimes directly give away that they've regressed. But I also think its a good way to enhance the emotional turmoil within the story but it also makes it a bit forced. (But as a fan of angst I personally love them not knowing.)