MMORPG: World's Glory

Shameless author here trying to write a video game story. Obviously, he spends a lot of time navigating his mind for the perfect words, scenarios and situations to make this a fun read for himself and obviously you guys as well. If you can leave some support in the form of votes, comments, and rewiews... I will go above and beyond the call of duty... no pun intended... to give you a good game novel!

The concept of the story seems alright, but things seem to move too fast with absolutely no explanation. Why does the MC get attacked? Who wanted to steal his character? Some of these questions have answers, but they tend to be super short. The author needs to slow down and explain more. For example, in chapter four he uses his dads building to be his game studio and orders food. Then logs into the game, meets his friend and suddenly gets surrounded by some people because he "entered their territory. A couple sentences later, the leader, Steel Lion, wants to kill the MC to get the MC's equipment. A few sentences after that, the MC has somehow managed to defend himself against 20 people with only himself and his friend, while also killing the Steel Lion. The fight goes like this " Corey's blade work is shown." then "Steel Lion ... find a sword in his gut." Then, everyone fighting the MC runs away because the Arachnids are coming. This is all in one chapter, and it's a relatively short chapter compared to how long chapters are on most novels. That's right, ONE chapter. The author has an okay story and plot, but just overwhelms the reader with info with no explanation or time to think. Sure, some explanations missing may make the reader curious or wanting to read more, but I feel like all I have are questions. Why does the MC want to start a game studio? Who is the MC's father to be able to just have spare buildings lying around? What kind of food did the MC order? How does the game work? what does the game world look like? Is Dream Knight a close friend, guild member, someone who he barely knows? How does Steel Lion recognize the MC if the MC didn't adjust his character like before when he was Thrasher and looks like how he does in real life? Why doesn't Steel Lion like the MC in the first place? What does the fighting look like? I mean you can't just have the MC bypassing the 20 other people and killing Steel Lion with no explanation. What are the Arachnids? All these questions come from ONE, short, chapter. The story is OK, but the pace needs to slow down a bit, and some world building needs to be done. And most of all, EXPLAIN, EXPLAIN, and EXPLAIN.

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Over all rating is Good. i like how the story develop. Not so OP at the start,i mean he got his real life training so its normal that his good with combat. And i also liked the humors on this novel. You'll like it when you read it :) Its good, but the chapters a bit short, it makes me want to read more hahaha

Very good so far wish it was a little better detailed and not so fast paced. But I can see it getting better. Need to make up space cause the 140 min

A nice review for the amazing idea hope you have fun doing this story and dont randomly go on a hiatus haha gamming novels can easy get to 1k plus chapters so do your best and make him op as kakarot in downtown tokio haha

though i have yet to read any chapters this is my type of novel so yes it's 5 star but maybe that'll change in the future anyways keep up the work and have some motivation (>.<)

Good luck. That's what I say to most authors

Its an amazing novel so far! Its everything i could’ve wanted! Op? Check! A game? Check! The one thing im confused about is the excessive use of the word “dady”, its making me think im reading a different ganera of novel if you know what i mean😳

Love the novel. Where is the rewrite and what’s the name. If no rewrite please more chapters looking forward to either I’ve been rereading the chapters waiting for more

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Well I thought the story is developing good but then I found out it's on hiatus I just started it reading today. Anyone know when it's going to be posted again

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I read just three episodes, but i could get no introduction, it seems it wasn't just me, i hate to do this but save your time guys, you will not know what is happening and it feels like the theme is copy-paste from Sword art online.