Strangers From Another World
That day, on New Years Eve, over half the children from all over the world, the youngest at the age of five and the oldest at the age of seventeen, vanished from this world due to mysterious circumstances.
Before they realized it, these children had found themselves scattered all over a parallel world of sword and magic. Not only that, each of them soon found themselves with strange and sometimes powerful abilities known as [Gifts] to aid them in this new world.
Confounded by the sudden appearance of these children from another world, the denizens of the new world called them the strangers from another world, or simply, "Strangers".
How will the denizens of the new world deal with these powerful Strangers? Why was the children sent to this parallel world? What is the truth of this new world?
And so, the story begins.
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Updates: Hiatus
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: A spelling//grammar mistake or two spotted (check comments)... Also, I don't know what, but it feels like something is missing... maybe it's because I have not read enough yet? Positive Feedback: It flows very well, looks like while you were writing and not on hiatus you had a good update rate, good plot, character, and world development thus far.;,;. and none of your world background sounds like a ****** information dump. Personal Feedback: I really enjoyed this novel thus far, I will keep it in my library to continue reading at a later date.;,;.
It's really a great experience reading this. The story and the flow were amazing I've got nothing to complain there. World background was written as vividly as possible, no complaint from me here. You better make mistake now Author! The characters, although only a handful was introduced I could see their personalities through their dialogues, and for that, a big plus from me, and as far as I've read I'll assume the relationship between the MC and Gene were sort of like Mentor and Mentees, no big deal there too. But, (AHA I'VE GOT YOU NOW!), nothing big only a misspelling one or two. Would I recommend it? Heck yeah! With a little bit caution for people who like small bites. (4.8 it's a bit long read xD)
Yoo, fro hereee!! This story is so interesting!! Crossing another world isnt unusual story, but this one was interesting enough to hook you up. Smooth narrative and great concept of magic. I really like the way this story twist around the plot. It make a nice surprise and make me curious for more. The world building here also great, it is clear enough that I picture the scene in my mind. Just you still have a lot of grammar mistake, especially the tenses. Past tenses and present tense are mixed everywhere, it isnt consistent. But overal it is good. Just, I have one question though. Who is the MC of this story? Please dont get offended, I am just confused about it between Alex and Gene. If it is Gene, then it is fine, you did a good job descripting him, but if it is Alex, he was too invisible in the vol 1. I know his character is shy and timid, he is seldom talking. But you should show the story from Alex's view more instead. In the vol 1, all I see is Gene, while vol 2 the story started from alex again. So it isnt stable. Although I really like Alex's character, but he is really invisible. If thats you want to show in the Vol 1, Alex's invisibility, then the story should be show from Alex's view in the shadow. Well, other than this, its all good. Please continue the hard work!
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