Chaos dimensional cube

THIS IS A CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK REVIEW AND DOES NOT PROBABLY RELATE TO THE CURRENT NOVEL'S TRUE RATING The novel was surprisingly good. If I were to say anything, you just need to reread your chapters more and put in commas at certain places. Only typo I noticed was you put ,., somewhere at the start I think. Noticed you aren't putting in commas before ands and buts a lot. Also for the story, its not realistic how he found the cube at that place. Countless people visit there every year, how was he the first to find and pick it up after (assuming its from ancient Greece) centuries have passed? Also I would change up your start. Its not interesting for readers to read flasbacks at the start of a book. This is why whe there are flash backs, its always way farther into the book or movie if its poplar. You should also consider a Prologue. This is how you grab people's attention, and interest. This is how they survive the first few chapters. I myself was not interested at the start, but I kept reading. Now I noticed two big plotholes of your story. One is he put countless death marks, but when you jumped into levels, he barely died that much, also he only marked at the start. Then its as if his flashback persnality disapeared and his whole personality changed. As I've read a lot of books and I am also an author, I can guess that the flashback isbfor way farther into the book, but guarantee 99% didnt think that much and just ignored it or thought the book was stupid and left. Second one are the stats, you made stat points really low, but whe MC gained stats rivaling the police officers, he was more macho and studd compared to them? Even more than that scrawny asian guy you said? Also try to describe emotions and five senses more, was bit bland reading. Try to describe things more, and add more relatable thing so its not 2D. Lastly I marked 3 for updates as long hiatus. I would've done two, but looking at your past record and past two days, nearly updated every day so bumped it up to 3. It would've hit four or above if not for that.

Rough start for the main character, but he finds ways to adapt. Curious approach to learning for the MC. Still trying to decide how much more of the book that I will read, but think it is worth reading a few chapters to see if the webnovel catches your interest.

This is a good story, I really like the writing. At first I thought maybe it wasn't really for me, but it kept me hooked up after a few chapters ! Waiting anxiously for the next chapter !

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Quite a funny and entertaining story of a man who isn't allowed to give up. This is the story of how a "lucky" find makes MC stronger. Please keep it up.

Jack, an introvert who was bullied and taken advantage of because of his name which means doggie. His father was not good at handling money and made bad decisions regarding this and incurred a huge debt in which he now has to pay since his parents died. Now he has to survive with a worsening predicament Will it bring Jack to insanity or salvation? I am loving the story thus far and everything's all good except for some grammatical errors but it could be cleared with an editor. This novel can reach great heights Author please upload more and regularly I am willing to spend my SP here daily if you fulfill these wishes ;3

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I have to say, the writing quality is very good. I'm very impressed. The MC is admirable and reasonable. The story line is developing nicely and the world building is on point. Great work 👌

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This is an unique plotline, and the story is amazing. I don't see much problems with the grammar, and I suppose it needs a bit of proofreading. Other than that, it's a great work!