In Alfan the world where the (un)fortunate protagonist of this story finds himself, are there at any point in time 5 living gods, if one should die a new one is added to the mix, thought the history of Alfan there have been many living gods in the world appearing as hero's, king's and queen's, master chef's, tyrants, or as completely unknown people.
join Mars as he sets out on a journey to explore Alfan to find out what kind of living god he wants to be.
as soon as he gets there that is.
Volume 2 going full steam ahead with 3 chapters a week!
chapters are more than 1500~ words.
Authors discord: https://discord.gg/uHVhX9m
Surprising there is not a review yet. Anyway, I'm not deep into this novel yet, so I can't give a score, therefore it'll be a 5 and I'll change it or not as I read along. The grammar is pretty good, no major mistake I've seen. Considering the chapters were supposed to be 1 per week at the beginning, this quality is expected. The novel is another system novel with a semi immortal mc. BUT! The way it works is interesting and unlike anything I've ever read so I'm kinda looking forward to the progression. Considering he is a "living God" you should expect some opness. It might not be that kind of story further along the line, and I don't really care if he's Op or not ( I like Op mcs), so don't go reading this expecting something too different and complain about it. Overall, I wish the author the best and I can't wait to see how this story evolves. Godspeed 👌
Impossible to read, no commas or capitalization. Author does not read his own work. So why should we? ........................................................................................
The book is good and it needs more ratings honestly it’s better than a lot of rated books"....."..........."......."................................
I love this even if it has some flaws, like how the creator doesn't natively speak English so it can be a little weird to get used to but overall it has a lot of very good elements to it.
Just not good, I got to chapter 4 and couldnt keep going. Some people will like it because of the comical aproach but this is not my thing. Stupid comedy is not my type of comedy when I am reading something. There are other problems but I will stop here since I only got to chapter 4. Maybe I will read it someday (hell no).
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This has good characters and an interestimg world. The personality of the MC is hard to grasp as he behaves in a random manner almost all of the time but the story is still very interesting. The grammer still needs much work however.
Should of reviewed this a long time ago :) Keep up the good work, I'm enjoying it. ............................................................................................................................................
The book is good and could go in so may directions. The character seem to have a life of their own though the main character coul use a power up soon . It kind of sucks that he hasn’t gained anything new but is simply getting back what he lost
after 2 years of being on webnovel this is my first review Ive made and honestly this novel was well worth it to spend the time to make this. the grammar usage and some spelling errors were made but still a higher quality then hundreds of other novels I have read. there was a few times I believe the story was rushed but the author made you connect with the characters and the development of those characters personality was well thought out compared to what I'm used to reading. I'm excited on what other interesting novels you imagination may bring out.
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well it was fun at start but after some chapter it got messy so I am off well thank you for the story ,atleast it was little more sensible as compared to many more stories