Mr.Bee Violinist
"What did you just say?!"
"Y—Yes sir! It's a Beeman playing a violin in the streets! And it can speak too!" He paused before continuing, "It played it so beautifully! I don't think my ears have touched anything more heavenly!"
"What in the name of— You're not making any sense!" He snorted disdainfully, "How could there possibly be an insect that can speak? Have you gone mad?!"
"Yes, s—sir! But it's just so serene and holy! It's as if the heavens have blessed us with an angel in—"
"You've gone mad?" He sighs disappointedly, "Guards! Take him away and lop his head off!"
"W—Wait, sir! You have to see it to believe it! It really does exist!" He begged the sire, "Just open your window and listen! Please!"
"You're mad, you even admitted it yourself."
In a vast world gifted with the beauty of magic and the mystery of adventure, instead of becoming your typical harem-demon-slaying-hero, I am stuck inside an insect's body with absolutely no-clue as to how I got here. What the hell?! I didn't know humans were so savage?! Wait, isn't The Adventurer Guild supposed to be the good guys? Why are they trying to kill me?! I have done no wrong!
My name is Riku Yamato, and I've been reincarnated as a Beeman in another world!
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I hope you guys could leave comments below and give advice to further improve the story. You guys could also suggest thing to be added into the story. Critiques are extremely welcomed here. If there are grammar errors or need work areas please comment down so that i can fix them immediately. -Slyc
The writing quality is occasionally inconsistent throughout the chapters. It might be great occasionally but it occasionally might be slightly bad because of some grammatical errors and sentence confusions. The stability of updates has yet to be determined because he has only posted a couple of chapter in a day but it seems to be quite good. Story development is gonna get sick bc I'm calling it XD. Also the main character has a bit of an inconsistency in personality. Might be good to some people might be not as well. The main character offs between loser and hero on and off throughout the first few chapters. Prob focus on that. For the world background try adding a slightly dystopian like world based on the medieval age and a mix of Japanese culture in it. Looking forward to the future of your novel. Salutations from this mister.
While the writing needed a bit of improvement on the side It's still a very nice novel to read. It has good characters and the emotions shown on the characters are quite good. Although there might be some downs to this novel compared to other novels it's still good. The MC has a really good twisted past so that's definitely a plus from me. I'll definitely comeback in the future once in a while to check on things after i read some of my other novels.
it's a good story. the story starts off pretty well in my opinion. I haven't got bored of it, so that good. All in all, I have no oppositions with rating this a 5 star review.
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I prefer protagonist who think more about their action but he's not bad because he's kind of interesting in a crazy way. It's also a kind of dark story I guess, so try it and see if it's for you. What I would like right now is to get explained about all the things happening, so please do that next! Also, English is my second language so I don't really care about the few grammatical errors in the novel (getting care of by now I think) and excuse my mistakes (if there are)
The writing was a bit inconsistent but world background, story and idea wise it was amazing. Looking forward to more updates:) Also the mc is completely awesome.
I really like the way you created a separate chapter for stats. To be honest, I might steal this idea. The story is good. Easy to stay engaged and captivated.
Cool story bro...ughhh....what was I planning to say again? definitely isn't something like EXP...hmmm.....ahh yes, I'll just go with "Ain't that bad at all!" cool...now i'm going to dive back down into the murky water that is the comment section.
A good novel with a good plot and good writing. You should read it. Also read my novel if you're looking for a novel to read. Search up LCIE, or click on my name, which will bring you to my profile. Click on the novel that's named 'Our Love is Like a Circle, Infinite and Everlasting'. It's not romance; the story will mainly focus on the character development of the MC. Anything else is just a plot device to further the story.
Everything is good except the ntr in the beginning and since you are my friend I will ignore it and give 5 star ............................................................................................................................ Is it already 140 word, my del button almost broken!
This story has a lot of potential! It kept me captivated as I binged read it while snuggling under a fluffly quilt and my ac is on full blast! It's always hard to find good novel in the Orginal section but I think that this one is a diamond in the rough for sure! Give it a try!
A friend told me to read this and by far it’s actually pretty good. Aside from the occasional bread slappin its pretty enjoyable to read. Especially because the story has those kind of brotherhood lives ya know? Besides, the friendship of two monsters being together and such is pretty intriguing.
Nice story keep it up boi! The story is very unique but it's not for me. In a critic point of view, it was very nice. Keep it coming. Continue writing this story!!
I will just say one word... THIS NOVEL IN AMAZING just do not quit halfway ..it is 100 time better then many top 20 novel...even top 10 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 I think i said too much