I don't wanna be an immortal!

Go for it! Your work is really great so don't be discouraged and write a lot more! It was a great start! Make sure to satisfy your readers! Goodluck on your endeavor!

Your story is great, and it's kinda unique heheheh.. hope you release more chapters cause it's really great hahah ;D :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Story is purrty good in which case I would probably read (If I had the time *Sigh*). Thumbs up from me!!! Hope ya novel grows better than mine!!! -Sllycc (Because why not?)

I don't know much about anything, but i like your writing style. I hope you will publish more chapters. But the length of your chapter is an issue. I guess you will improve it. I will give you stone now, to promote you. You are good. Improve the world and describe everything, build atmosphere. I like tsundere, as you asked about how to progress. PLLEASE be keep story meaningful. Please.

Hi, this is the author here, this is my first novel, I'm sorry if there's any grammar or spelling errors, pls point it out for me so I could edit. Btw, this novel is about the mc who starts off weak with a system. The only op thing about this mc is that he was granted the wish in the previous life and became unkillable now. Join Lucas as he grows strong along the way, and at the same time, try to find ways to kill himself. You can be part of the story making too, just share how you all want the story to proceed, I will try to make it part of the plot. : )

Cute mc though I ain gay hahaha but if possible please make it longer... Such waste if its gonna be so short. It has so much potential to be great good luck

Before I read this I have a question. How can getting kill make you stronger? I mean killing others to get exp makes much more sense and did the mc really just suicide by intentionally getting crush? Wait how did the mc even know that the guy falling is even an immortal? Does that mean the mc suicide without even knowing he will get a system and reincarnate? But the greatest question of all is that if he is an immortal, how is he or she falling out of the sky? It just don’t add up

I'm fricken disappointed man. WHY DID U DROP THIS?!?!

I really enjoyed this book the character has a really good personality and the story has a nice storyline I would work on the world background though