Deviant Crown [Complete]
[Gender-Bender] Before Yueguang dies he asks the Heavens that if they can grant him another life, please can I be reborn as a woman... The ones up in the heavens listened to him but during the process someone fucked up somewhere and screwed him over. "Is this what I get for asking the heavens to be reborn as a woman?" [Well so be it!!] Waking up in a foreign world he takes each step carefully not overstepping the boundaries but hits hurdles and meets his master a Martial God. With a rude character, strange experiences and a best friend that loves him, but disappears, he struggles at first but concurs them all and soon meets someone that makes him second guess his life.
Cover art by: the_nerd.artist
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The story looks well so far. For now the main focus is on romance I guess. I would like more adventure though. The pace of the story is good. Need more updates 😁👍
update, please. update, please. update, please. update, please. update, please. update, please. update, please. update, please. update, please. update, please. update, please. update, please. update, please.
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I like a lot this story, but I feel that you need to develop the world more, also there are some things what could change, as the protagonist's interaction with his family, besides that I think that his motive for wanting to be a woman is a bit vague, I think that part should have developed more, likewise this story has a lot of potential.
MUAHAHA! My Queen has commanded that this lowly retainer rate her wondrous work of art! Thoust know not the entertainment that awaits ye all who enter here!
Looks pretty good so far, though you probably won't get many readers with that name, cultivation novels are pretty homophobic imo..............................................................................................(140)............................................
Wow i must say the book is wonderful i didn’t think it will be so sweet at first but when i continued i was baffled 😯 I totally give this book a 5 star 🌟 if you are a fan of magical books 📚 then this is definitely for you
:cries: Where is the sequel? I thought they will have their HE but no, suddenly it just cut short like that? I need the sequel, I need to know what happen :cries:
I really like it but I want more chapters It is also not like some novels that just jump into the romance but spent time building the Mc character
My review doesn't really matter, but........................................................................................................................................................... ........ I like it.
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Bad.
Total ****! Keep this gross stuff out of here! Why do you put this stuff on this website! This is nasty! Delete this from this website or it's going to corrupt this amazing app! Just go away!