Unlimited wishes in naruto
Author: Ove1230
2.33
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Ken kishi was going home from work when he heard a loud noise and then darkness
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TOO MANY GRAMMATICAL ERRORS!! FIX IT PLEASE.. AND PLEASE DON'T INCLUDE IN YOUR CHAPTERS ALL OF THE RINNEGAN PATHS OVER AND OVER AGAIN.. IT JUST TAKES TOO MUCH CHARACTERS AND SPACE.. OR ARE YOU DOING IT ON PURPOSE SO THAT YOU MET THE MINIMUM WORD REQUIREMENTS?
So far it's great it's so hard to find a story like this and for it to be good too. Can I make naruto smart or something and could you go to bleach and one piece that would be so cool.
I don't get it what the people think when give this novel wannabe 5 star,the structure is a mess, you will confuse between the mc monologue or dialogue between the characters, MC too OP in nonsense manner he is the OP baby in NarutoVerse, till this point the story is meh, you don't believe me? Try read it for the first 3 chapters and voila a headache. Although i appreciate your passion to write something , atleast you need the basics knowledge for it man,1 Star for your passion.
5 starrrr for the effort and bravery.. Ill review once Im finished reading it.😄 DingdongDingdongDingdongDingdongDingdongDingdongDingdong O **** iam a trash reviewer now....
Where you sleeping when you wrote this?! Or were you using your legs? It's horrible mate, I lose neurons just with each chapter I read, and I read them all...
unlimited wishes in naruto world, makes for a boring concept. grammar is bad and the one thing content wise i can't get over is his height he wished to be 165cm(about 5 feet 4 in). who wishes to be 165 as a guy? this is wish fulfillment literally.
The grammatical errors almost make it completely impossible to read and the story is quite poorly written as well. Now, don't come at me saying "You can't do it better yourself", because I am not interested in writing although I believe I could produce something better than this. Sorry Author, the concept is kind of okay I guess, but you wouldn't be able to make much more than 60 chapters because everything would become extremely repetitive due to our MC literally being a god.
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Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender. ........................................................................................
Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad.
Bro.. Plss add more chapters.. Its good.. Yeah and pless keep up d good work.. 😇... The grammer needs to be a little better.. Yeahh.. And i hope you take ou mc in Soul land 4... Hihii.. It would b fun..
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This **** is garbage. You never know who is talking or when they are talking and it has no development since he can just wish for whatever he wants. There is nothing intriguing about this since he doesnt have to work for anything.
Only one word can describe this: UNREADABLE! Were you even trying when you wrote? At least put some interest in your work... Well, whatever. Good luck with the next story.