SuperDeku

Hey guys, Author here, my Quirk "Thick skin" makes me shameless enough to give myself a 5* review I more likely than not don't deserve but do anyways to help my novel get more publicity.

I’m sorry man but I’m my opinion, if Deku got superman’s Powers then he doesn’t even need almight’s power at all. 1: krytonian is already insanely strong all by themselves 2: since krytonians are pretty much indestructible, deku doesn’t even need to train as his body can already take the full brunt of one for all. 3: if the two powers were to unite then the mc can just outright kill every villains on the planet within minutes so that wouldn’t even be much of a story

Yes more .......................................................................,.,,.....,.....,..,,,,.,,,,,...........Need more.......................want more...............(all this = don’t drop)

I like novels............................................. This is a novel........................................ I like it......................................................

I wish. it. long. term. novel. because. it. nice. and. awesome.

Okay so, the first few chapters made me Cringe. Not because of the content, but the way it was laid out like a block of text. I couldn't read it, my eyes were going EVERYWHERE. I liked that the writing quality improved after say the third chapter where ideas, dialogues and points of view were separated by paragraphs. Overall I'd like to see where this goes, and I hope you come have a look at my work as well. Pip pip!