The Castle System

I like this already. You have my support and blessing. ........................................................................................................

Good story. Nothing really to complain about. Mc has emotion and feels when he does something. Mixed story dark fantasy, systems/ recantation ecc Slice of life ****** but complex story, somewhat relaxing, violent. Pros Good mc Good story flow Dark story line that is interesting and not completely creepy. No rape hopefully it stays that way. Cons Needs more chapters maby the complete book. It is a system novel so at some point ether the story will become mundane or seriously contrived. Considering how good the author is he can ether have pland the hole book from beginning to end for a amazing story. Or if this is an updating story type it will probably cap out around chapter 500. Ha I am complaining about something that doesn’t exist, that is how good this book is. To the author success and a good read for me.

So far it is a great beginning of a story. Well above average with respect of web/light novels; it has a different 'feel' from most, hard to say what it is exactly at this point. Looking forward to see how the story progresses!

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Good so far. Thanks.---------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------------------------

I love this already the first couple chapters build up to becoming an mc who could grow to become a king I am excited to see how he goes about it I also hope he starts to a badass :D

A very nice rpg style story with reincarnation and a game like system. overall a fun read. the updates are a little slow. after a few chapters , I think , there was a jump in explanation of some stuff, but it was negligible.

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