Ella is soon to be Alpha after her 18th birthday. she has found her mate but is scared to come clean to her mate. Axel is the alpha king what happens when he finds her will he reject her or accept her while keeping up hes player ways
Wow... I'm the 1st to review...
well...
I like this story...the theme is good and so is the story...
But, There are a few grammatical errors and it feels a little rushed...and few confusion here and there...
But still, i think with some improvement it will be a smashing story.
Best of luck and please update regularly... After all a regular updating story gains many loyal readers and will be able to maintain their interest and anticipation for new chapters
6 years ago
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ell007_noah
The story is so far amazing. I'm looking forward to read something more amazing and interesting. I think that the chapters are quite short. Overall it's remarkable.
6 years ago
0
Leah_Mills
Love it so far great story..............so yeah I have to fill up space or cant post so byeeeeeeeee......not lol pls let me post already................?............
6 years ago
0
heybooxoxoxo
I love it the novel is so good and I need more pls ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
6 years ago
0
Deltalanii
The book was amazing..
I really enjoyed reading it but there are some spelling errors the and to top it off this is one of my favorite so far..Can't wait to read more.
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Wow... I'm the 1st to review... well... I like this story...the theme is good and so is the story... But, There are a few grammatical errors and it feels a little rushed...and few confusion here and there... But still, i think with some improvement it will be a smashing story. Best of luck and please update regularly... After all a regular updating story gains many loyal readers and will be able to maintain their interest and anticipation for new chapters
The story is so far amazing. I'm looking forward to read something more amazing and interesting. I think that the chapters are quite short. Overall it's remarkable.
Love it so far great story..............so yeah I have to fill up space or cant post so byeeeeeeeee......not lol pls let me post already................?............
I love it the novel is so good and I need more pls ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
The book was amazing.. I really enjoyed reading it but there are some spelling errors the and to top it off this is one of my favorite so far..Can't wait to read more.