Amenonuhoko: Spear of Heaven

Very good, gave me that serious Konosuba feel, I also got a little hint of GATE as well, but maybe that is just me. This series looks very promising so keep up the good work!

As it is still at the very beginning of the story. I can't tell much but it is good so far. Just never stop even if you hit a dead end at some point.

Yaritsuke, a 16 year old, grants his mother's last wish to have a normal life. Yet along the way, problems rise up as people he knew and he will know come into life. Trying to escape his past, will he succeed or will he fall into the depths of hell for the sins he has committed?

Pretty good considering the age of the writer, however it still needs to some work to be done. Writing in 1st point of view is extremely difficult, therefore good job at attempting it. I think that the plot is pretty interesting so far and I’ll look forward the future updates. Anyway keep up the good work 😊

Good work~ Although it might just be my preference but, so far, the character I like is the MC. Which is great for the readers! If they fall for the MC then it means you're doing well~! Good Luck~