A newly minted vampire must struggle against all odds to control his new and fantastical abilities and to defend against all the supernatural threats that come with his new identity
An interesting concept. The writing can be a bit clunky and could use some polishing but it's easy for me to overlook it because I find the vision of the story and passion so enjoyable.
I particularly like the dialog between some characters. The behavior and mindset of these characters is fun to read and explore. There's something special here and it draws me in.
I'm a fan of the action so far and there seems to be potential for more gritty action and romance. I'm a sucker for unapologetic detail.
It seems this novel may have been dropped or is on hiatus. I hope it's the latter because I'm very interested to read more. It would be a shame to drop this. Please keep writing, I'd love to discover how the story unfolds.
Keep it up!
5 years ago
4
Zephirin
Beautiful concept although a bit rough I can see this novels potential.
Anyways, should you need me I shall awaiting the next chapter of your brilliance with baited breath, and a willing heart. 💅💋
6 years ago
4
Empressblue
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6 years ago
3
grimfate
Very new book but has potential. ..............................................................................
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6 years ago
3
FutureSleet
Amazing story can’t wait to see where it goes........................................................................................................................
5 years ago
1
DaoistCrazy1122
A superb novel with lots of potentials, please keep up the good work and don't drop this.
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5 years ago
1
attackman
Well planned and thought out. Makes for a great read to pass the time while off work. Looking forward to more chapters and further character development.
Hi! This is Kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a month ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a $50 advance by joining the contest.
4 years ago
0
IMightBeGod
man i want to give this novel a five star review but the update frequency is what brings it down though all the other points of the story are great and im really enjoying this book hope for more updates.
4 years ago
0
krish_digwal
So i was going to drop it, but the story has its charme. Would really like to read more. It is a diamond that has to be polished. This could become one of the best vampire stories, maybe the best.
So please keep on writing, you have talent and the imagination!
4 years ago
0
Daoist1rvBov
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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An interesting concept. The writing can be a bit clunky and could use some polishing but it's easy for me to overlook it because I find the vision of the story and passion so enjoyable. I particularly like the dialog between some characters. The behavior and mindset of these characters is fun to read and explore. There's something special here and it draws me in. I'm a fan of the action so far and there seems to be potential for more gritty action and romance. I'm a sucker for unapologetic detail. It seems this novel may have been dropped or is on hiatus. I hope it's the latter because I'm very interested to read more. It would be a shame to drop this. Please keep writing, I'd love to discover how the story unfolds. Keep it up!
Beautiful concept although a bit rough I can see this novels potential. Anyways, should you need me I shall awaiting the next chapter of your brilliance with baited breath, and a willing heart. 💅💋
Reveal Spoiler
Very new book but has potential. .............................................................................. .........................................................................
Amazing story can’t wait to see where it goes........................................................................................................................
A superb novel with lots of potentials, please keep up the good work and don't drop this. ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Well planned and thought out. Makes for a great read to pass the time while off work. Looking forward to more chapters and further character development.
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Hi! This is Kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a month ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a $50 advance by joining the contest.
man i want to give this novel a five star review but the update frequency is what brings it down though all the other points of the story are great and im really enjoying this book hope for more updates.
So i was going to drop it, but the story has its charme. Would really like to read more. It is a diamond that has to be polished. This could become one of the best vampire stories, maybe the best. So please keep on writing, you have talent and the imagination!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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