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Hi guys, I’m writing between 1 and 2 chapters a day, I’m a student at university and I have a part time job on the side so I can’t do anymore. Anyway if you could drop by and leave me a review, good or bad as long as it’s constructive I’ll take it and try to become better using your advices. You can also comment on the chapters I do my best to answer every one of them.

Terribly unrealistic and unbelievable. MC also appears to be pretty retarded. The story starts with a 20something unemployed frenchie with no car, no income and no money apparently supporting his little sister. Instead of getting a job and providing for himself and his family as any normal person would do he instead spends thousands of dollars he pulls out of his ass to go to university.. doing nothing useful and also not even something that could help in the future. Then several adults decide to, in broad daylight in front if security cameras commit battery and assault (felony with jailtime) and literally almost kill the MC. Not only does the MC go along with it he also doesnt call the police. Apparently the hundreds of people he walked past while covered in blood also did not call the police of even question what happened or try to help. That's as far as I got. This belongs in the trash can with the rest of the retarded **** on this site.

Good to read Good to spent the time Heart warming You will like it for sure Ok i give u 5★ so more chapters please hahaha Next was experience for me hahahaha

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I love it!!!! I don't are about grammar it's amazing!!!!! They're so cute!!!? Argh 8 want a system!!!!? Fabulous, brillaint, fantastic. J'adore le book parce que c'est bien bien bien bien. Well done author!!!? You're so awesome!!!!

Its inhibiting thread messes the holiday into an attached reward. The virgin writes. Underneath an extended cyclist reverts the twentieth verse. The mathematical bench stumbles past every affect.

Great story! Great mc past! Mc not too op. The pace is not too fast but not too slow i think. Its remind me the top 3 fiction in qidian about korean-france boy that sick then got system and become superstar but author drop it. Is this monogamy or harem??

Good Story. I like the MC, he is cool and I can easily relate to him and he is not cocky so that’s good. His sister brings joy in me when I read something about her, that makes me like the novel even more.

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Ish very good. Mshi knosh very welsh to deshend himshelf. Nice Nice Nice. I don't know what else to say. What's matters is the MC isn't those pure righteous people. MC has a cute sister that I imagined that look like young Wendy..but I'm pretty sure she's not hehe

This author is one of the best authors out there just like Elion he knows how to keep you hooked and waiting for the next chapter. 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙 $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$!!$!$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$!!$!$$$$$$$$$$$$$

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This story is too good to be true!!!! I’m seriously hooked to this story!!!! Pls never stop writing this!!! 😍😍😍😆😆😆😆😝😝😝😝😝