"Lin Yi, I'm pregnant..."
"Oh my God, triplets?"
Lin Yi was immersed in boundless shock.
"Ding! The Good Father System is officially activated!"
"Newbie reward: A 400 square meter luxury villa in the city!"
"Be nicer to your wife and children, and you'll have more chances to trigger rewards, oh!"
Lin Yi was ecstatic.
"Xue Mei, let's get married!"
Cozy loving couple story. But regrettably - no lemons😞😞😞😞😢
i have just reading and this one looks quite promising just keep updating author ,dont drop this
Great story up until the mid 200s. It's almost like the author mixed up their book notes and ended up blending two different stories. However I truly enjoyed the story up until that point.
good novel the system any person wants to have in real life ....well, good setting
just keep updating faster .
TL;DR: Inconsistent story, don't recommend. Wish I could give it a better rating but it's impossible currently. This work needs some serious editing and proofreading. Every chapter there are numerous problems from the more common ones in here like using wrong pronouns and wrong names. And more commonly in the last chapters I read it just keeps on forgetting the daughter and saying they only have two sons/babies every time. And the story consistency is getting worse and worse, the main antagonist(up to where I read) Han Xuemei, the FL cousin, just got orphaned and adopted by the FL's dad out of nowhere when her parents are still alive in their hometown.
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Im only at chapter 7 rn but i rate this book 5/5 max amount i can give because sometimes we need book like this to heal our heart of this dark world..Thank you so much author
Trash mtl. As always the translation isn't good enough. The characters are bland and terribly written. Also the plot is repetitive and boring af. Author had to add cultivation bullshit in the ordinary slice of life action to keep the story floating. But yeah its terrible, no unique ideas [img=faceslap]
It was a great read til around chapter 250. After that it’s like the author forgot the title of the novel and what was mentioned previously. I can let small things slide like gender mix ups and name mix ups here n there slip. But adding content that wasn’t even discussed in previous chapters and making it seem like it’s important is really stupid. Go back and rewrite the novel from beginning with a new title if your gonna do that. Seriously it went from goddess secretly gave me triplets to twins so fast and poor mengmeng was forgotten. Bring back Mengmeng! Poor baby :(
The genders always flip, names always mixed up, content forgotten it was already written it’s just garbage don’t waste your time
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Everything was going well till Chapter 250, it's like the author had an amnesia and started changed everything from the story. The triplets were suddenly gone and only twins remained, the mc's parents, the three nannies, aunt Wang, Fleads mother disappeared, mc's cousin that he was close to suddenly were not talking as much. Just imagine that the story is over after 250, the rest of the chapters are trash after it. Too many inconsistencies.
until 250.... It was good after its starts changing... it is a completely different story and you are charging coins for this??? please return me my coins which I spent on chapters above 250/-. I will also take this as a warning and be on caution and never spend coins in webnovel. even if I do never in bulk. who knows I may get scammed again.
I really enjoyed the story up to about chapter 200 and stuck around up to 300 hoping for it to get better, seems like the author revised the beginning and made it better and then gave up. after about chapter 200 characters disappeared, the writing went downhill, the kids are suddenly going to kindergarten and talking at less than a year old and the MC and his wife completely changed. timeline makes no sense and the plot is incomprehensible