John was your average man. The last thing he ever expected was to die while trying to save a child from a Mass Shooter during a Christmas parade. Thankfully, karma works in funny ways, and this was only the beginning of his story. Now armed with an extensive scientific knowledge and sent far into the past, he must survive by earning vast stores of knowledge by doing as many good deeds as possible.
I hope this helps... I realy like your story premisis, and the character is developed decently. The story itself,... there are not enough chapter to comment :-(
I really like your story. I can't tell more about the character or the plot, story development, etc, because there are 4 chapters. From the fealing I get, it is a xianxi story mixed with sword & sorcery. It seems to be weel-mixed :-) Keep up the good work.
Cool continue This Job, please More Chapters I am a like that, i am Sorry for error ortográfico i am don't speak english, This Job good continue.