commander_pride_21

If you had to chose a power among all the powers of anime what would you choose 
OF COURSE YOU WOULD CHOOSE ESCANOR SUNSHINE 
i mean who wouldn't want to be as badass as escanor with his great pride ans awesomeness 
follow our MC as he uses his powerful grace to rule another world and to prove that he is the strongest man in the world 
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author note : 
so this is my first novel and i wish for you to criticize me and show where are the faults and i promise to not drop this novel

The Sin of Pride in Another world=>[Dropped]

Hello, it's been so much since I wrote something. I stopped at that time because I was passing my exams and I needed to concentrate and so I left the writing. Now After I finished my exams, I can finally return to continue the story.


Unfortunately, I noticed that the power system in my story and the huge power inconsistency between Mana,Ki and soul power made me unable to see where the story goes 


That's why I decided to to not continue this story anymore and rewrite it with a new power scaling system and also new arcs that will build the story 


I also deided to make the first arc longer to build the MC and the interactions with the other characters.


I decided to release chapters starting from next Sunday.


thank you for following the story and the new one. Hope you like it


a new idea came to me