The Sin of Pride in Another world=>[Dropped]

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Author: commander_pride_21
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If you had to chose a power among all the powers of anime what would you choose

OF COURSE YOU WOULD CHOOSE ESCANOR SUNSHINE

i mean who wouldn't want to be as badass as escanor with his great pride ans awesomeness

follow our MC as he uses his powerful grace to rule another world and to prove that he is the strongest man in the world

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author note :

so this is my first novel and i wish for you to criticize me and show where are the faults and i promise to not drop this novel

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HeartFlame
HeartFlame

I'm impressed that I've been able to read this far, I guess I quite liked the idea of Escanor power. How should I say... the writing is terrible even for me that doesn't have problems with bad grammar. The story is lackluster and cringe The MC tries to be Escanor but just come out as a cringe copycat most of my problem with the novel is actually the MC, the others are bad but are like junk food, the MC, however, is extremely painful to see, I recommend to the author actually see how Escanor acts, he doesn't act like he has self-confidence problems, you can see how he is confident in himself and he acts that way without being humble, but he's merely stating facts instead of being on being a paper soldier, everything he says is true and that's where his confidence comes from. The MC just seems like a **** with chunnibyou and problems with his self-esteem Again I liked the idea but the execution failed

6 years ago
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CZ2128_Delta
CZ2128_Delta

Great concept but trashy writing!! author please get an editor and review the chapters before posting please! Great concept but trashy writing!! author please get an editor and review the chapters before posting please! Great concept but trashy writing!! author please get an editor and review the chapters before posting please!

5 years ago
7
Tyler17
Tyler17

Show the world the LIon sIn of prIde 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

6 years ago
5
TheInsectCollector
TheInsectCollector

Author switches between 3rd and 1st P.O.V. in the same sentence, the grammar isn't so bad that it's unreadable but it's still pretty bad. I hate that his is a harem.

5 years ago
3
Melshan
Melshan

Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. 😎😎

6 years ago
3
Meme863400
Meme863400

Reveal Spoiler

5 years ago
1
AhmedAhmed
AhmedAhmed

if i was him i wouldn't choose for escanor i would choose for vegeta or broly or goku ....................... BUT most importantly i would choose for the most broken character THE LEGEND OF ALL ANIME THE STRONGEST UNSTOPPABE AND INVICIBLE THE MYTHICAL ANIME CHARACTER SAITAMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

5 years ago
1
Daoist1uO0Y7
Daoist1uO0Y7

muito bom essa novel o problema é que eu não sei ler English

2 years ago
0
Yggdrasil_
Yggdrasil_

This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

3 years ago
0
aaelite1
aaelite1

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.

4 years ago
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TwilightZ
TwilightZ

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4 years ago
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0_Darklord_0
0_Darklord_0

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4 years ago
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LordAinzSama
LordAinzSama

Noooo!! I was genuinely into this story!!!! I'm sad that the story got dropped :<< ----------------------------------------------------------------

4 years ago
0
VIDAR_GOD_OF_WAR
VIDAR_GOD_OF_WAR

I think it might just be me but I cant read even the first chapter because it won't load.

5 years ago
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PotatoesAreAwesome
PotatoesAreAwesome

Although I ain't far in reading this novel but this is totally BS! Look there is a big difference between being arrogant and proud and the MC acts like a spoiled young master that is disliked in every novel. Your writing is also very bad and there were many grammar mistakes. You could look at your novel first and rewrite it if there were any mistakes then you upload it. I am already impressed that I read 7 chapters of this novel, probably because the idea of having escanor's power.

5 years ago
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