Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

A high fantasy novel that follows the journey of Adam, a naive little kid of humble beginnings, who stumbles upon a heaven-defying treasure that sets him down the path that most Magi could only dream of yet never hope to achieve. If you have any questions, feel free to ask in the comment section. And thanks for giving this book a shot. I appreciate it!

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This will be a longer review. I want to write my opinion on the quality of writing, stroy and character development and anything that still comes to mind. I am not a native english speaker, so I'm sorry if this is a bit confusing. Writing Quality: Compared to many other books I've read online, this one has to be one of the easiest to read. Sure, there may be some grammar or spelling mistakes mixed in, but rarely. It won't interrupt the flow of reading or make a paragraph hard to understand. It also gets better with every chapter. One thing to critic is the repeat of some story points. I don't mean literally repeating the paragraph but rather a summary of past events and information that are relevant to coming events or characters. This in itself is not a bad thing. I personally just feel it sometimes happens too often with the same information or information that hasn't been that far in the past. I feel the summary can be too deep and take up a lot of the chapter. This is of curse only my own opinion. I may just be lucky to generally have a good memory of what happened so far, so it feels unnecessary to me. I sometimes also find it confusing when there is a scene change or who is talking in a group setting. Thought that is probably more of a me problem than unclear writing. Story and Character Development: Okay, so first of all, this is obviously a long story, so don't expect rapid progress in any way. Building a story, especially a long one takes a lot of setting the scene. That means the world's background being explained more throughout. For this kind of story that is absolutely necessary and in this case also well done. So it may feel that the plot progress is a bit slow and it takes a long time for big events to happen. But that is because everything happening is well explained and not rushed just to get to the action or exitement. We are shown the built up to those situations as well as the daily life of the characters and in this way get to know them better. As for character development, yes, it takes time. But again I think that is totally understandable in such along story. We get to know our MC as a 15 year old teen. At the time, because of his upbringing, he is completely ignorant of the world. No, he isn't stupid or slow. He is just a kid, who didn't have the privilege of education at a young age. He needs to learn more than just magic, he needs to learn how the world works. So in the beginning, he may seem stupid and ignorant even though he has the lotus. But seeing someone else's experience and experiencing life yourself are two completely different things. He learns fast and becomes strong fast. Yes, it takes a long time to go from one major level to another but that is to show that becoming stronger is no easy feat. Compared to his age mates he is insanely fast and strong. But of curse no matter how strong he is, there are always stronger entities out there. It is frustrating to see him still being cautious or afraid in front of those stronger and that even after coming so far he is still not at the top. Then again it is not fair to compare him to those hundreds of years older than him. He is a Genius and no one on the same power level can compare to him. But given his goals we are still in the early stages of the story. Even after over 900 chapters we are still on Tron. And once he becomes the strongest on Tron and leaves he will be weak again as the entities in the greater universe are incomparably stronger to those on Tron. This is a story of this genius magus, who seeks his way in the eternity of the universe. He grows stronger, learns long forgotten knowledge and meets unbelievably strong entities. This is a story about Adams journey. His life form a weak orphan commoner to presumably the strongest being in existence. To sum it up, if you are looking for a story with a MC who is overpowered, with no one who stands a chance against them from the very beginning, than this mag not be the story for you. In this story we follow Adam as he grows and learns. He is a Genius no doubt. But the universe is infinite, full of unbelievably powerful entities. To become someone of similar or even more powerful strength he will need time. He will need to journey the universe and experience it's wonders. He will need to overcome all dangers to gain opportunities. And most of all, he will need to find his Way. Dear Autor, I love your story. You are doing great.💜 I can't wait to see Adams story unfold thourther.

How the fk is Mc 15 and every other side character they literally act like 10-13 years old at most. And than there is the Fact that Mc turns put to be a Beta Simp at chapter 20 something that was so put if nowhere just because he has seen 1 goodlooking girl.

Genuinly such a joy to read. Super well worded. The characters are impossible not to love and are funny! The world is a mixture of Harry Potter and elements of Murim. The MC also doesn't just get an instant buff to become OP, but is granted a path towards it that requires hard work. The best part for me is how each character has a good deal of depth to them that slowly gets unveiled. Everything also feels so natural (with exception to the main advantage the MC has which is the premise of the book). Overall top notch book. Also, MC has👇🏼*this* personality, which I like.

As of ch. 37 the Mc is a wuss, clown and an idiot of highest order. Nothing special about him even with the powerful cheat he has in the form of white lotus which captured the souls of 4000+ magus and the clown has absorbed some of them yet still has the intelligence of a rock.. Tho this statement is a bit unfair to the rock.

Amazing work. The writing quality is well above excellent, not too repetitive to feel boring and not too "purple-prose" to make the readers lose interest either.The story development is good, with the pace being a mix of slow and fast depending where it needs to be.The mc is intriguing and has a lot of potential. His motivations are simple and plain yet - to become a Magus. I wonder what it'll become when he achieves his current goal.The world, to be honest, is the one thing that has interested me the most. It's vast and full of all kinds of possibilities, and I can see that the author has a vision in its creation.A 5/5 start from me.

On this whole platform this thing second only to Shadow Slave. It's a shame if people miss out on this. Get it to the top my friends! Great characters, worldbuilding, comedy, whatever you want. It has it!

at first I thought I found some hidden gem in the pile of trash in webnovel...the tow first chapters were promising..a serious mc with a great cheat kinda gave me the vibes of some epic cultivation novel...yet the moment the academy arc began everything went downhill...the mc got his first friend..yep the same fatty trope everywhere...and the we start an unending series of "whoha" and some childish shit..then the female friend with a tragic past...the author was trying to build a comedic atmosphere with a touch of some heartwarming moments and he failed miserably....the academy that was supposed to be some huge behemoth was gathering with its headmistress to watch a match between tow newbies that just started a week ago...there is no depth at all and everything seems shallow...the magic was absolutely trashy..I thought I was reading some martial art novel...the author messed and delivered a very poor power system.....I can rant nonstop about the bad things in this story..so I will say it's a story full or overused cliche...no depth...no a single thing intresting..it may suit some new readers but as someone whe read hundreds of books...this novel only belong to the trash category

even though the MC has everything needed ... keep doing unnecessary things ... doesn't learn from his mistakes ...the author keeps forcing plots ... idk why... maybe for more words? or just has no clear plane for the novel... anyway keep the hard work Author ... am sure you will do better in the future...

Great plot, explores a lesser used concept of magus that often is taken by just mages or cultivators which is nice and the stories is great sets up good background and world building and were and how powerful the character the character is and and isn't currently! Great Potential that keeps getting more and more drawn out and excited too see more of it!

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Author has confirmed that there will NOT be Romance or Harem. So if that's not worth 5 Stars idk what is. Can't think of an actual review atm, so I'll just update it when this has more chapters.

I’ll be cheering you on for your WSA entry, as I can see the potential in this lore. The prologue provides a clear direction and a fine briefing on what to expect from the ‘peak’ experts of this world. The words are easy to interpret, concise, and help the readers to grasp the settings of each scene without having to think too much. The information feedback is just as smooth with little fillers, especially when the characters are mentioned with little snippets of their past, present, and their expectations for the future. This is slowly building a web of information and connections, but if one isn’t careful enough and is simply reading for the sake of skimming through, it’s easy to be lost in the storytelling down the line.