When a game named Author Online was released to the world, it started off a new era for VRMMORPG gaming.



With a newly developed technology that allows 1 hour in real to be 1 year in game, one can truly enjoy it to one’s content.


In a small island off to the right of Mainland Hammer

A boy was born


His name .. If identified, displayed:


Lance
[NPC]

What awaits this NPC? Find out in the novel!

NPC Life

Writing Quality: 3/5
Reason: Just a few minor grammar mistakes, missing words, missing punctuation or overuse of punctuation.
Nothing major to note.

Stability of Updates: 5/5
Reason: The author is dedicated to his/her craft and has uploaded multiple updates in the past week.

Story Development: 5/5
Reason: The story is progressing well, the first chapter was like a prologue chapter and introduced the main character's backstory somewhat well.

Character Design: 3/5
Reason: The MC is a small and weak teenager. In the first chapter he is captured when he is 16 years old, gets sold to another country as a slave, and is sold and re-bought multiple times over the next two years due to his weak and small stature. The story opens up when he is approximately 18+ years old. No real big description on the main character yet. But this is good, because we don't see the mental flaws of the character yet. Most other stories have a lot of dumb MCs and that really throws their stories down the drain.

World Background: 5/5
Reason: Place names have come up with ****** but good descriptions. The Author System has made its appearance once or twice and still has much room for improvement.

Overall: 4.2/5
I'm looking forward to reading more of this story. I only have time to read one chapter a day, so I'll be looking forward to tomorrow to read the next chapter. Despite a few inconsistencies and a weak young ***** main character, I personally like stories where a weak character becomes stronger. Kind of like a coming-of-age but in this case since the MC is already an *****, it's going to be more of a maturing story? We'll see.