Though it is very early.
It's funny. I liked the high school retired emperor concept.The chapters are long except the first one.
I initially thought that it was an ancient theme but it was rather wuxia.
Just some grammar mistakes..
It is just the beginning.
Keep going.
Good luck.
6 years ago
3
UnjustlyUnderpaid
I loved it so farXD although there were a few grammar errors(mostly capitalizations) everything else was really good. From the comedy to the character development (development thus far) and to the actual story itself. I love OP people hiding their true identities to act normal. I just hope he is t one of the people who is super stuck up when his true power is revealed. Anyway I hope you keep writing and my only other complaint is that there are only 4 chapters so far xoxo xoxo
6 years ago
1
Kimberleyy
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4 years ago
0
Daoist1rvBov
Hey there!
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Though it is very early. It's funny. I liked the high school retired emperor concept.The chapters are long except the first one. I initially thought that it was an ancient theme but it was rather wuxia. Just some grammar mistakes.. It is just the beginning. Keep going. Good luck.
I loved it so farXD although there were a few grammar errors(mostly capitalizations) everything else was really good. From the comedy to the character development (development thus far) and to the actual story itself. I love OP people hiding their true identities to act normal. I just hope he is t one of the people who is super stuck up when his true power is revealed. Anyway I hope you keep writing and my only other complaint is that there are only 4 chapters so far xoxo xoxo
Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Reincarnate as Prince:Change Magical World with Industry. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! htt**://rb.gy/sxwmsa
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
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