Though it is very early.
It's funny. I liked the high school retired emperor concept.The chapters are long except the first one.
I initially thought that it was an ancient theme but it was rather wuxia.
Just some grammar mistakes..
It is just the beginning.
Keep going.
Good luck.
7 years ago
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UnjustlyUnderpaid
I loved it so farXD although there were a few grammar errors(mostly capitalizations) everything else was really good. From the comedy to the character development (development thus far) and to the actual story itself. I love OP people hiding their true identities to act normal. I just hope he is t one of the people who is super stuck up when his true power is revealed. Anyway I hope you keep writing and my only other complaint is that there are only 4 chapters so far xoxo xoxo
Though it is very early. It's funny. I liked the high school retired emperor concept.The chapters are long except the first one. I initially thought that it was an ancient theme but it was rather wuxia. Just some grammar mistakes.. It is just the beginning. Keep going. Good luck.
I loved it so farXD although there were a few grammar errors(mostly capitalizations) everything else was really good. From the comedy to the character development (development thus far) and to the actual story itself. I love OP people hiding their true identities to act normal. I just hope he is t one of the people who is super stuck up when his true power is revealed. Anyway I hope you keep writing and my only other complaint is that there are only 4 chapters so far xoxo xoxo
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