TOS (Old Version)
In a world filled with war and horror, she was a tool of slaughter.
She fought her way emotionlessly through the war for her masters' commands.
But it isn't until they die that she realizes how much the people she killed meant to her.
...
People say that being immortal would be an incredible dream come true, but they are liars.
Immortality is a nightmare.
People also say that they would rather have no feelings than to feel hurt.
But she would rather feel something than to feel nothing at all; especially when people who care about her die right in front of her, under her own hands.
She would do anything to become human.
To live, to feel, to die. Happily.
To be in control of her own fate.
Even if it means losing everything.
-----Author's note
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Yes I really like this novel and it makes me kinda feel sorry for the character knowing what she has been going through,I even came to the conclusion that your novel is underrated
The intricacy of the writing style piqued my interest. This was truly a good read. I couldn’t spot an error in the text, as narration and dialogue are both well-conveyed. The description itself is written with enough details and flow of the prose is very much fluid. There is nothing much I could really critique. Truly one of the best here in WN. Keep on writing.
Your synopsis is good, writing quality is fine, little grammatical errors and typo error. Detailed description in dialogue and world background. The story is developing at a slow and okay pace. The character design is good as well. Nice plotline but I got a little confused with Eyrie's character and the double reincarnation stuff. Maybe it was done for suspense but its not having that effect. Try shortening some of your paragraphs, and some of your paragraphs got cut, myt have been as a result with typing with word doc. Well nice work. Keep it up.
Everything is perfect no grammar error,no spell mistakes and the way the story is described feels like I was in the character shoes. I specially like the complete surrounding explanation of the author that will give you a crystal clear idea and picture of the story.
Oh author Dear author what can i say i guess this is what they call it sweet torture ? i want more but there is so little ! i did read many novels about rebirth but your is something else ! there is some mistakes in grammar but overall its great . i am waiting for more plz update more.
The story felt very intimate in my opinion. The plot felt natural and I like it. I like how the mc is. Overall, a very good story. Looking for more
Amazing story. Love it. Like the character interactions and smooth narrative. The writing has no visible errors. Story has potential, keep it up.
Author!!! Why do I find this story fascinating and at the same time AMAZING! You have excellent prose which I love the way you describe each scene as if I were also inside the story, So far I am loving it! I sure am loving the story! Your descriptive writing for me is 5/5 that it gave me the inspiration to improve my writing more!. I would like to vote but I used it all up already, so I'll keep going back to this story, read the next updates, and sure to be stay tuned all the time as I'll vote next time because it's worth reading! Well, keep safe! Author! ....I added this wonderful story to my library!
The story is overall very enjoyable. The flow is not fast-paced, and that makes it easier to digest the information after each chapter. Although all the dark and mysterious implications, I find Fei very cute and innocent. By reading the first several chapters, I can feel the calm before the storm. I really liked it this way because I see some novels dive straight into war and action and it's just not interesting that way. I loved this story and already added it to my library. I'd leave more reviews as the story progresses. Hopefully one day, the author of this novel will get the attention they deserve for their efforts.
I love the plot of your story, each chapter keeps me captivated. Your writing is also creative and well thought, I'd say this book deserves more attention. All in all, I give a 5/5!!! Nice work👍👍👍
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