Very good, i think its the only story that is in Hindi on this site. Well story is progressing very slow but i think thats okay .,........................
6 years ago
1
shahinrezasbd
very nice story bro great going.
Apki likhne ki soch bohot bada hai
Write more updates waiting eagerly for new one.
Keya yea story mei sirf sim hi magical hogi hero nehi?
6 years ago
1
Zenobia
Shameless Author here, with a shameless review.
I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly.
Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you!
https://rb.gy/5s05wc
5 years ago
0
Mukesh_Tholia
Very nicely written. Please update soon............................................................................................................
6 years ago
0
IDONTHAVE
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6 years ago
0
itsRoy
Ye kaise kar lete ho yar?
Thriller story thodi reality based honi chahiye. Apke kahani me galtiya hai. जैसे sim aadhar link hone ki last date 31 March 2018 thi. Aap 2 साल 6 महीने बाद घर आते हो. यानी कि आप 2020 September में पहुच चुके हो लेकिन जिंदगी 2018-19 वाली ही... और भी बहुत कुछ है, मूड खराब हो गया इसलिए रिव्यू दिए.
Very good, i think its the only story that is in Hindi on this site. Well story is progressing very slow but i think thats okay .,........................
very nice story bro great going. Apki likhne ki soch bohot bada hai Write more updates waiting eagerly for new one. Keya yea story mei sirf sim hi magical hogi hero nehi?
Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! https://rb.gy/5s05wc
Very nicely written. Please update soon............................................................................................................
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Ye kaise kar lete ho yar? Thriller story thodi reality based honi chahiye. Apke kahani me galtiya hai. जैसे sim aadhar link hone ki last date 31 March 2018 thi. Aap 2 साल 6 महीने बाद घर आते हो. यानी कि आप 2020 September में पहुच चुके हो लेकिन जिंदगी 2018-19 वाली ही... और भी बहुत कुछ है, मूड खराब हो गया इसलिए रिव्यू दिए.