A Raging war between the Celestials and the Demons had spiked an extreme amount of destruction in all of the planes, a team of semi-powerful individuals fought alongside the Celestials with their leader sacrificing his life in order to deal a massive blow to the leader of the Demons. His reincarnation being born into the world centuries later, with the Demonic King on the road to recovery a boy by the name of Sora has to take up the mantle and win the fight that his predecessor had failed to finish.

Hero's Return

Now I don’t normally do reviews, so please bear with me.

The story is still new (chapter 21 as of this writing) and has pretty good grammar. The only things I found really detracting from the writing early on, were that the point of view changes, were not always immediately apparent. Making a small header or something stating who’s point of view you are about to do, would help fix that.
And the flash backs were unfortunately even worse. 
One minute they were fighting a demon, then, suddenly they were having a flash back. There was no real transition in The writing to indicate a flash back was starting. I only realized it was a flash back when they started to talking to the past self of their leader, instead of fighting the demons.

I hope I am not coming across as overly harsh, because I do like this story and look forward to seeing where it goes.
 The author has built the foundation for what could be an interesting world.



This story at the time of this review is the very definition of an undiscovered gem. The focal character, the reborn hero from the synopsis, has barely been introduced so far as a point of view. That is in fact why I currently label them as a focal character and not main character. The Story revolves around them, in fact it seems the whole universe (multi-realm world building) may revolve on his growth and development. The main progression of the story so far has been a reveal of the story of the previous hero's life and death, and his Party trying hard to support his successor/"reincarnation" from the shadows as they wait for the new hero to get powerful enough to gain memories of them, but also protect him while he is still too weak to defend against the BBEG.