Mercenary System
Leon used to be a Special Ops agent, one of the best agent in his country. After 10 years of service he retired from his profession and wanted to live a normal life, get normal job, be married to a beautiful wife and to have children.
Until the car that he's driving fell off the a cliff because the brake din't work. During in the midst of the fall time seems to have slow down. Leon suddenly cursed in his thought "F*ck! if survive this fall i will definitely kill the person that cut off the brake cable, or if I reincarnate I'm gonna find the one who did this and kill him. Sigh, if I survive this crisis I'm gonna find a beauty of a wife and mistress then have as many children that i want."
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MC reincarnated in a different world, with magic and qi. Looks like a harem, concidering that MC already described himself as unfaithful and mentioned the size of his manhood in the very beginning. I'm writing this because info section is very nondescript and gives no real idea of what's this novel all about. Looks like a generic system novel. Writing quality is meh, haven't read enough to rate the world building. On a plus side - consistent daily updates. I'm not going to continue reading this novel, and only writing this review to save others some of their time.
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Expecting a bit more when read title and description, but already read 20 chapters and really disappointed. MC supposed to be some elite special operative yet acts like a teenager, actions he takes seem to be more focused on MC being "cool" than being tactful. Spec ops are supposed to blend in not draw attention, experts in recon, yet MC immediately makes ******* choices that don't match up with a Spec ops mentality. Author had good ideas in novel, however seems like they didn't organize their plot and went more with what he thought of at moment. Pretty harsh review, but what I honestly think.
This novel is great for those who wanted to read isekai vs modern weapon. My thought on this novel is that this novel is all good as far as you don't read it at your work place. NSFW in some part, but it still acceptable and well written. The only downside is the author is on hiatus. Thank you for writing. Keep up the good work.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you
Writing Quality good 💥💥💥💥 Stability of Updates slow💥💥💥 Story Development good💥💥💥💥 Character Design good💥💥💥💥💥 World Background good💥💥💥💥💥
Great stuff so far, stable updates everyday. Wish we had more chapters per day but we can only hope. Minimal mistakes, easy to read. Pace wise is a bit fast to my taste but still very good.
I can't really say to much since the story had just started. The overall grammar is done well. The mc has pretty much just started his journey so not much to say on that front accept that the set up so far has kept me Interested and I can't lie it's nice to see a more toned down system. Update stability has been good so far so hope to see it stay stable.
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Interesting story, continue updating! Thanks--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
is this novel dropped? .... why the author not updating any more???.................. ............................................. ......... ..................... . ........... ....
As a novel military genre fan. I love how the story is currently developing. I agree with how the author use only WW I and WW II equipments and machinery to not make it an overkill if they are using 2019 military technology.
I believe that all of the qualities are here to make this a 5-star book, however, the main thing that is making this book a 4.6, is the stability of the updates.