Natsu The Supreme Overlord

I'm just reviewing my story, if you want a Dark Natsu and a harem, you'll like this story, my language is not English so I'm sorry if the grammar gets bad, I'm trying to improve

Finally a dark angst natsu i always hated the friendship thingy i mean at first it was fine then the author just abuses the heck out of it that its not even funny anyway nice story but your gramar need work man like ALOT anyway please continue and have a great day.

LOVE IT don't drop it....👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Well, the stability of updates is quite hard to tell as you have barely posted any chapters. But I have to say, I really REALLY, enjoy this story thus far. I have high hopes for this novel, and you will probably get better at writing as time goes on, but for now, the only thing that is really lacking, is the grammar. Though there is quite a few novels with much less grammar. I sincerely hope that you continue writing this.

I wont talk about grammar. The author is brazilian after all :v . Been waiting for a dark natsu. The story is pretty nice. But i dont really care about zeref. Need more chp to see how this goes.

I like the concept of this fanfiction. However, it's such a shame that some parts of the story are grammatically unreadable. I'm not saying that this fanfiction is bad, it's just that I hope that the author will improve his/her writing quality.

Well, beside the grammar everything are good. Seeing how natsu got betrayed and slowly turned 'dark' somehow exhilarating... It is still beginning stage, can't wait for more!

Simply amazing the plot is intriguing and unlike many fan-fics with op Mc's natsu has depth and a goal besides strength it fantastic. I can't get enough of it.

I really am enjoying this story because i always felt like Natsu forgave everyone and just put up with Lucy for to long. I think it will be cool to see how natsu interacts with other worlds with demons like high school dxd.

I love the take you brought upon fairy tail with natsu, the friend bs bothered me too much so to see natsu go to the dark side is just too awesome

From a professional viewpoint this novel is pretty much the definition of "pretty bad" but only otakus who like op mc, world hopping, and harem will like this. Unfortunately I am the latter. WHOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOO AUTHOR KEEP RELEASIIING THEMMM CHAAAAPS!!

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pdates getting slower.... Pls more updates im craving for more........ I always put stones so you can update fast but it seems its getting slower instead. Haha💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎 💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎 💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎 💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎...💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎 💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎 💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎 💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎

I really like this story so far! An alternate universe where the Fairy Tail Guild show's it's 'human nature'. Natsu doing a Tokyo Ghoul Episode 12 moment. (Realization!) Natsu stops being an Airheaded protagonist. Natsu Unlocking his true potential. Natsu becoming 'evil' to attain what he will want/desires. Finding out his older brother is Zeref. Not being a dick to his older bro because he gained power. (For some reason, a lot of novels like doing that) Revenge! (Hopefully in the next 1-3 chapters) Dislike: Doesn't know the difference between [He/She] All of that was REALLY unnecessary (Below). Just say they arrived, most people here watch Fairy Tail. We could have gotten more out of the chapters instead of these fillers. :c The first was Ajeel Ramal, or better known as 'King of the Desert' (2 Paragraph's Later...) The second was August or better known as the "Magical King" (2 Paragraph's Later...) The third was God Serena or better known as the strongest mage of the Ishgar mainland. (2 Paragraph's Later...) This is Bradman or better known as the 'Reaper'. (2 Paragraph's Later...) This Era Dimaria Yesta or better known as 'Valkyrie' (2 Paragraph's Later...) This was Invel Yura also known as Winter General (2 Paragraph's Later...) This is Jacob Lessio. (2 Paragraph's Later...) This Young is Larcade Dragneel or better known as the 3rd strongest member of the Spriggans behind Irene and August. (2 Paragraph's Later...) This was Wall Eehto or better known as "The Adjudicator." (2 Paragraph's Later...) This is Neinhart. (2 Paragraph's Later...) This is Irene Belserion the strongest woman of the Spriggans and the Queen of Dragons. (2 Paragraph's Later...) (Filled a whole chappy in total)